Great start for your first story. It is nice to see your skills finally brought to the Yaoi/Slash Hell known as Harry Potter. I look forward to more updates.
I was honestly worried when I was checking your Naruto stories and saw you just posted a Harry Potter one. Considering your borderline irrational love for Sasuke I almost expected you to be a Draco fanatic which would have honestly been a tragic waste of your skills. Seriously, it is just my luck that my favourite author on this site enjoys my least favourite pairing in anime (Sasuke/Hinata) :/
Anyways, good luck with your writing,
LordSinnoh
I have really liked your piece here! I do love the irony of Draco trying to make Potter seem like the least desirable male around, and instead of that, making him the one to fuck them all. Yes, I will reference other books in my review about Harry Potter. Anyways...
I loved the smut with Luna, and starting with her is interesting! She is quirky, but she seems like the kind of girl who would just go 'Eh, as long as he's happy and let me join in, I'd have no problems. As long as they are cleaned of all *insert random creature here*', which does fit this story if that's the way you plan on going.
Well, all I can say right now is that I can't wait for the next chapter. I know Harry lost his first chance to pound the youngest Weasley ass once, but I do imagine he's not letting it pass again. And a threesome with his two best friends needs to happen! Just keep up the good work!