Wow!! Just wow!! You are such a great writer. The plot, the smut, the aura around it all is amazing! I love the way you write and I love the way you write Harry. I usually stay quiet when I read, but I just had to review this one. Harry and Draco's rrelationship was riveting in its own sense. The though that it started off as "lessons" and grew is great. I've never in my almost 4 years of reading fan fiction and smut have seen ANYTHING like this. This is great and I want you to know that you have a talent!
Oh my! I come back to not one, but two chapters! What a rollercoaster. I loved getting to see the glimpse of Harry's muggle friends and seeing Draco open himself up fully and finally realize his feelings. But damn! I'm glad the chapter ended with their tentative friendship, but my heart aches for them both.
I'm not disappointed at all. I absolutely love reading your work. You inspire me. Honestly when I get stuck I reread your work when I'm at work and read the original stories (the new illistrated versions) at home once my two year old goes to bed. That's why I was rereading them. Your stories are easy to get wrapped up in :). As for this chapter, it had to happen at some point anyway. Now I wonder if Draco will go out to some muggle gay clubs this summer just to help (maybe) get over Harry and if he might accidently run into Harry or Paul again.
I adore your stories. I'm actually happy to hear you are going to focus on this one for now, because while I totally love Unstoppable (and Say My Name, for that matter) and want to know where that one is headed, I am desparate to know what is going to happen in this story, and this chapter definitely hit me right in the gut.
I also just wanted to say that I love that you are working within the world we know from the original books, where other writers take bits and pieces and craft their own world. Your stories don't feel like a stretch to me (even if I had to ingore the epilogue), and I am thoroughly enjoying continuing to follow Harry's journey into adulthood and cheering on each iteration of Drarry's evolving relationship. You are very clearly a talented writer who takes pride in crafting a well thought-out story, not someone who is just churning out HP-inspired erotica. I'm hooked and I look forward to each and every one of your chapters. Thank you for writing and sharing these stories with us!
Absolutely love this story, can’t wait for them both to realize they’re in love with each other, please update chapter 14 soon.
Amazing, as always. I love reading you writing so much. It just speaks to my soul.
Oh how I have missed you! I reread SMN and am working on Unstoppable right now but this one was next! I just love your work! I understand about life being crazy. The only time I get to read and work on my stories are at work (since I have a desk job) because my crazy 2 year doesn't let me do that at home lol. Yes this chapter was intense as well. But I really liked how we got to see what some of Harry's other past partners had to say about him being so reserved. I also think that Draco is really starting to fall for him. Can't wait to read more of this story and ALL you others (present and future :) )
I miss you. Please come back.
I read this as soon as you posted. Sorry it took so long for me to review! I absolutely loved it and it’s so great to see how your writing has evolved since your earlier work - I’ve been re-reading as I patiently wait for new chapters :) it’s always good to get a nice smutty chapter!
Oh. My. God. I felt like something was coming, Draco was opening up so much, but not this yet. Not so soon. This chapter was well worth the wait. I love that you managed to sneak some emotion into this absolutely smut filled chapter. Cannot wait to see where you take these guys next.