I love what you've done with the characters - main and support. This is brilliantly written and I've read it all in one (or three because sleep) go. I am now very curious about the next chapter, because while I want Drarry to be the endgame, I actually like Kyle!
Hello Thunderbird! I don't usually leave reviews (shame on me), but I've been so riveted by this fanfic of yours that I am rereading it, and it is just so good... the way you describe physical and emotional feelings is very relatable and captivating, it is intoxicatingly sexy, heartwarming and totally makes sense, at least for me. I love following the development of their feelings and relationship, and it's because it is slow that it doesn't feel forced or fake. I've also read your other fanfic "Say my name", and it is great as well, so I already know you're a great writer through and through (;
While I am anxiously looking forward to the next chapters, I will be rereading my favourite parts whenever I feel like smiling or blushing.
Keep up the great work, Happy new year and thank you!
Thank you for the new chapter. I read a lot of romances and the moment when two characters realize they've been mistaken about the others feelings or intentions can sometimes be a little cheesy or a big let down in the story. Not this time. Draco running into Harry and they're conversation work perfectly. It will be interesting to read what happens when they're both back at Hogwarts. Also, thank you for not making Draco forgive Astoria fully and promise to be friends, it would have been absurd for that to happen and I love your story more for the simple fact that you didn't do that.
A side note. I never really leave comments on people's stories other then a 'thank you' or a 'please write more'. I really like your writing style and your story progression, so thank you for all that you do. Hope to read more soon. Happy Christmas!
Oh my gods. Another freaking amazing chapter. I'm honestly completely obsessed with this fic. I'm going to be heartbroken when it ends. I came for the smut, but I stayed for the plot. And I keep coming back for the perspective. This story feels so personal. Every time, I think it can't hit closer to home, it does. The interaction between Draco and Astoria was so honest. Thank you for writing this. It's doing me so much good. I love Kyle! But I'm very excited for Harry to have tried to make his feelings clear, and for whatever is next for the two men.
I have just created an account so that I can review your story. I love it, you have me hooked! I check every day to see if there has been an update. I cannot wait to read the next chapter!x
You are the only reason I continue to check this website. I adore your writing.
Kyle seems nice... but I hope he doesn't last past the summer. :/
First off, "Harry Potter School of Pleasing a Lover".... HAHAHAHA!! I love that so much and laughed out loud when I read it.
I appreciated the warning at the beginning of the chapter regarding it being a challenging read because Draco is not with Harry - I braced myself and went in with an open mind. And the first time I read the chapter, I was smitten with Kyle in the same way Draco was. I was also a little sad for Kyle knowing that he was taking a chance with Draco in a way that was not usual for him, and that we know that it's not going to work out for them in the end. But then I read the chapter again, and I couldn't help but scream at Draco in my mind when I really saw the things that he found adorable in Kyle were the things that he loves about Harry.
This chapter has really haunted me in a way that others have not - I am really turning over in my mind all of the ways you are going to bring our boys back together and the damage that's going to come along with it. I'm also very happy that Pansy is going to start being a sounding board for Draco - hopefully with more women in the mix, they'll sort their shit out.
Another chapter by Christmas would be the best gift I would get this year, so if you can swing it, you'll have at least one VERY grateful reader. But it's holiday season, and if it doesn't happen, I'll continue to wait patiently until it does happen. Thank you so much for writing this! I love it so, so much!!
I am loving this story!
I started reading this chapter super angrily - Draco isn’t supposed to be sleeping around, he should be with Harry sort of thing (I completely trust you but was still annoyed haha!) and then we meet Kyle and omg is he lovely - but now I’m sad as Kyle will eventually have to go and you have written him so well!
I love the way Draco came out to Pansy - I was proper laughing.
I never thought that it was Harry’s fault as well because he never communicated his feelings because I’ve been so wrapped up in Draco but you’re absolutely right! Hopefully they both come to their senses but I’m also excited to see where this goes with Kyle.
Your writing in general gets stronger each time- especially this fic. Happy writings and can’t wait for the next instalment :)
YES, YOU ARE BACK! (And with two BRILLIANT chapters) Honestly, you really hit me in the feels. It was really great to meet Harry’s muggle friends and see their reaction to Draco and Harry’s relationship. Draco was also completely clueless because there was such a difference in their relationship to Harry’s previous lovers - such as the exclusivity and the length they’d been together. It was such a climatic chapter (literally ;) ). After reading that one I thought they’ve probably been caught by the papers like in SMN so I was really shook when they ended it and I was near to tears! (In a good way though - it was great that it wasn’t predictable and that it was emotional)
i feel your writing has evolved especially in the smut scenes - (they have always been good) when reading SMN you can see how it has slightly changed (I think) - you just seem a bit more comfortable and at ease (maybe it’s just me haha!) i think each chapter is stronger as you go on, in general, as well!
So glad to see you’re back and I can’t wait to keep reading when you’re able to write :)