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for Mudbloods at Hogwarts

by Gandalfs-Beard

schedule May 20, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Should've had Hermione bite of Malfoys penis XD

schedule May 15, 2018 at 12:00 AM

i love your content but sadly you dont release normaly but hey quality over quantity right?

-Dauth_Daret

schedule May 10, 2018 at 12:00 AM

The breastfeeding to me is super cute and I hope you keep it.  It's like the one... Romantic(?) thing they have .IDK how to explain it. But I find it really sweet

schedule May 9, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Sir, your writings have sickened me. FETCH ME THE BUCKET!

In all seriousness I rarely if ever review, but had my morbid thought before and had to pose the question. Interesting approach in giving girls a go. Meal times with a privacy booth seems like a valid solution. Though I can't imagine how embarrassed Susan must have been standing in line outside the tent.

But yeah, this story is horrible. I have read a few of your other works, and lovey dovey romance is way more my pace. Non-con is not my usual fare by any means, and most such stories turn me off pretty quickly.

Yet somehow this trainwreck is something I can't look away from. It is riveting despite making me sad and uncomfortable. I hope Black gets some serious revenge for the girls, and that the system can be fixed. I'm super impressed by just how quickly you write, including your past works too (and with so few errors!). Though I am glad to know this is out of your comfort zone and somewhat unpleasant for you too.

So, er, keep it up?

Also, another morbid thought, but Susan's Turgeo made me think that with all the semen in Hermione's mouth, a girl getting serviced after several boys might run the risk of impregnation. Dumbledore's lack of forethought here could cost them maybe?

schedule May 6, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I'm with Pixel I was curious about it being male only feedings. 

person bwinx32
schedule May 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Nah.. its all right. You are doing a wonderful job in regards to implementation of your idea. Especially when it is so different from your other works. Sometimes its a bit too much nt that i want any part of the story to change. You know sometimes the emotions just get to you. I am just waiting for the satisfaction i m going to get when snape and others suffer from the consequences of their actions.
schedule May 3, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Why no girls taking advantage of free oral sex at mealtimes? I get that most are sympathetic, but years of indoctrination should have a few eager to get their muff buffed.

person bwinx32
schedule May 1, 2018 at 12:00 AM
I m nt gonna lie.. i fucking cried reading this chapter. Poor harriet suffering so much. Ohh i hate that bastard snape so much. I hope he gets to feel the same pain harriet and hermione are feeling, preferably withe the samr method. I cant wait for them to escape but more than that i cannot wait fof retribution.
schedule May 1, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I liked your curse but does it include coverings like blankets? towels? I mean it seams that they could get around it if they know what they are doing. Of course that is if they know about it or try to figure it out. 

I hope you have something very creative as revenge for Snape and Dumbledore. I really want to see that. please, please. 

schedule April 23, 2018 at 12:00 AM

So far my only complaint is that scabbers is still in Hermione. Just weird me out(?) makes me angry(?) IDK but I hate it. In a weird way I do hope they keep the magic inhanced breasts. 

 

Why didn't Sirius just floo closer to Hogwarts. I mean I guess he can't just walk out of The three broomsticks but I'm sure a spell could've done something or what not. Glad he got food though