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for Mudbloods at Hogwarts

by Gandalfs-Beard

schedule July 1, 2018 at 12:00 AM

A few villiams? In my opinion everyone that is not putting a stop to it is a villian, but that is just me. I am glad to see that some of the students are starting to band together, even if it is only when it gets a little too personal. Nice job, keep it coming.

schedule June 24, 2018 at 12:00 AM

an amazing story and plot, can't wait until the next chapter! 

schedule June 16, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Perhaps you are right about the curses, but I keep thinking about the lily flower that turned into a fish and poof the fish was gone after she died. According to Slughorn anyway in the Half Blood Prince.

schedule June 13, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Ron deserves the punishment. lol

also i also wanna know what if tonks meets lupin. hehe~

schedule May 29, 2018 at 12:00 AM

OMG at last I see Ginny's reaction and the Weaselys!!!

I can't wait to see what would be the punishment of Ron, Percy and the twins lol.

And I'm dying to know what would questions Ginny would ask to her brothers about Harry-I mean Harriet. *cough cough*

 

schedule May 27, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Well that was a cute chapter. I really wanna see Ron's punishment. Maybe have Molly top him ;)

I don't remember if it's been asked/answered. But since snake is dead shouldn't the spell/curse he put on Harry and Hermione be lifted?  Although I can see why it wouldn't I'm jw. 

What's gonna happen with the other 12 slaves at Hogwarts?  Where do they live? You only mentioned the 1 3rd year I think. Plus the gifts to the centaurs. 

 

schedule May 25, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I really thought the curse would have died with Snape. Also I wanted to ask if Harriet accidently blasted off his arm with the dark mark or did the death eaters all have the mark blow up with Voldemort so no more horcruxes? I know I am getting ahead of the story. I would at least make Dumbledore very very hurt. He was going to let that man kill Harriet before he let the dementor have him. At least that is what it seems like as Quirrel got off the killing curse first. The backlash was not all Harriet's fault. She thought the explosion was all her fault because she is uneducated and does not know the power behind that spell. 

schedule May 24, 2018 at 12:00 AM

It may be stopped by the collar but ya know wishful thinking. 

 

 

About time that damn rat is dead. Interesting choice of removal tho. 

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schedule May 24, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Loved the tentacle scene. Almost wish she got to keep one of the babies. Voldemort dying despite the horcruxes was a nice surprise.

 

One of the weakest vengeance scenes ever, though. Quick deaths for Snape and Pettigrew. Unless Sirius hires a necromancer or something, that was pathetic.

Hopefully, Dumbledore and the other tormentors get punished to a degree that leaves an impression. 

Still, fairly satisfying when I didn't think you'd even bother with writing a comeuppance to begin with.

schedule May 22, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Disgusted with the behaviour of the boys of Hogwarts, pity for Harriet (Harry) and Hermione, it is mixed with the feeling of being hot and horny.

Please oh please update...

I'm interested to know what would be the reaction of:

01: Ginny- when Harry was turned into a girl

02: The ladies from Beuxtabons: i hope when Hermione and Harriet escapes, they'll go straight here.

03: Durmstrang: What would be Krum's reaction on seeing Hermione like this?

Thankssssssss...