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by Sablesilverrain

schedule April 16, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Interesting. I quite like this. Been reading it all since yesterday and really have no idea why I didn't read it before. I OF COURSE like that Severus is one of his mates and I think it's good that his most dominant creature chose Snape because it makes sense that he would be the first and most senior of the mates. I'm guessing that Draco is silver and that he will be one of the mates but not positive. Harry didn't react when Draco knocked into him. I'm leaning towards him matching with the dangerous creature and his best friend who sleeps around will match with the incubus. Though that will HAVE to stop. No way will Harry want a cheating mate. Theo strikes me as someone who would have rougher hands than Blaise. It'll be fun to see how the relationships go together.

I really like the anonymous journal too. Looking forward to reading more :)

 

 

schedule April 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I rebooted my account specifically to review!

I'm really enjoying this story and always look forward to the next chapter. It's hard to keep going when there's no feedback, good or bad. I will say the pen names Harry and Draco picked were bland and did nothing to hide who Harry's incubus mate would be, but I feel as though you weren't trying to make it a hard guess anyway :)

As for further developements, I'm guess Voldemort for the his third mate, or possibly even that he won't have one.

Keep up the wonderful work!

schedule April 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Great Story. Is harry's other mates draco and blaise

schedule April 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

My most humble apologies for having not revived yet! I'm loving this story in major amounts! Now that its reached over ten chapters it has a place in my windows left open to follow. 

The three creature feature is delightful. As well as the slow build burn between Harry and Severus. Have always loved those two as a pairing. Please keep up the wonderful writing, you have a devoted fan here.

Kitty5tatts

person Jan
schedule March 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Sorry for not reviewing, been really busy lately, and somehow I was logged off this site, and I couldn't remember what email I used, let alone which password out of the hundreds that I have had over the years, keep in mind that the last time I logged in was about... almost 6 years ago when I first got this tablet, and ever since it automatically logs me in.... so yeah, that was a fun adventure cause it wasn't letting me review without me signing in 😞

Lol, I simply love your Harry, he's so spicy and witty in this story, it just has me laughing at unexpected times, like with this last chapter, the fact that Severus was able to see Harry wanking to Remus! Oh if only Remus knew 😂  that would historical! Please update chapter 9 soon.

person Jan
schedule February 23, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Happy to be back! 😊 what can I say, I'm addicted to your writing. I can't stop thinking if Silver is Draco, or if this story is gonna have a twist and silver turns out to be a completely different person, or even and new character! And if so will he also be Harry's mate?

Hmm, wonder when Severus is going to start letting Harry get close to him, I like that he's using the occlumency lessons to get a little closer to him, in a discreetly fashion. Can't wait for chapter 6.

 

person Jan
schedule February 21, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Interesting start, can't wait to read more, please update chapter 5 soon.