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by Sablesilverrain

person Jeli
schedule June 23, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Hey 

great story i love it. Please continue and finish it that would be perfect. 

schedule June 21, 2018 at 12:00 AM

snapes being a brat lol i hope that he can move past his issues so harry can get close to his other mates . please update again soon :)

schedule May 31, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Sorry so many others seem to be as lacsidasical as myself when it comes to leavimg reviews. Hope for your sake we get better.

Am very curious to see how you handle Severus being the "submissive" in the relationship, lol. Looking forward to the results with great enthusiasm. 

Sincerely

Kitty5tatts

person Jan
schedule May 10, 2018 at 12:00 AM

LMAO! Poor Draco, having all of his favorite men in his life taken by the big bad Harry 😂🤣😂 please update chapter 15 soon.

schedule May 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

 i have just gotten an account to review our story.

i love this story and cheak for it every day so please keep up the great work and update again soon : )

schedule May 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Loved Draco's resonse... then die lol

schedule May 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Cant wait for more of this.

-Dauth_Daret

schedule May 6, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Well that was lovely half-surprise!

I figured Blaise, once you mentioned that Draco wouldn't be a mate that it would be someone underused. Lucius was a nice touch though, he is one of my favorites. 

I'm a "Harry is a perpetual bottom except in special circumstances" person and him bottoming to Severus wasn't my favorite. It was also very lack luster, as though it was just something that needed to happen, but I didn't get a sense of either party particularly enjoying it. Granted, that is sex in a lot of cases, but I was a bit disappointed.

Also, everyone is taking this too well! Lucius especially would need to put up more of a fight I would think. I'll give Blaise's reaction a pass though since he's just kind of horn dogging around.

I like this story, truly, I'm just used to there being more emotion involved; everything just comes off so even keeled. Could very well be my lady instincts though, needing things to be more charge and emotive than necessary.

Please keep up the good work! It's coming along quite well.

Best,

SkiPi

person Jan
schedule April 23, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Oh, this last chapter was hot and spicy, with a little clumsiness in there but still very enjoyable! (Go Harry)Please update chapter 13 soon.

schedule April 23, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I'm glad Harry was with Severus first.