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for Forgiveness

by Drarry-Lisa

person maria
schedule September 17, 2018 at 12:00 AM

i really like the story. Normally I-m no big fan of m-preg but used like this it is interesting. I am curious how things will get better for Harry and Draco.

I don't like hermiones way of acting to be honest but i like the setting of the story so I can live with that fact.

person Toddy
schedule March 10, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Good story - very disturbing.

Whitmore

person nari-chan
schedule March 9, 2018 at 12:00 AM

i love every minute of this story and i cant wait to see what unfolds after this explosion of a cliff hanger !!!! please update again soon 

schedule February 28, 2018 at 12:00 AM

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person Jan
schedule February 21, 2018 at 12:00 AM

So far I'm intrigued, can't wait to see how Harry's reaction to his past actions will be like, and will Draco just tell Harry or will he let everyone know the truth? Please update chapter 7 soon. 

person Anonymous
schedule February 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Your story is great so far. I enjoyed reading the first few chapters and look forward to the many more that will come. Though I am not sure I can see them moving pass their past into an intimate relationship but maybe more of a friendship based off of mutual respect for what they have been through. But then again, that strong history together, the passion they once felt, it could again blossom. 

 

schedule February 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 1. Why the hell would Harry be such a sick and tell his kids after all these years. I feel Draco's anger. I wonder what Harry's side of the story is in this. Obviously he had divorced Ginny. How long ago was that?

schedule February 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 2. Wow. Way to go Draco. Now I feel kinda bad for Harry, but Draco can't be done yet. He needs to know the pain he caused Draco. He needs to know the truth of the baby. I'm torn between vengence for Draco and pity for Harry. But does Harry really deserve to be forgiven?

schedule February 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 3. Oh how history repeats itself. That was very good and noble of Draco to stand up for Albus. Shame on Scorpius. But he is right about one thing, he did not force Albus like Harry did Draco. It hurts when your loved ones can't tell that you have pain behind your eyes or written on your face, unless like Draco said, that they do notice and ignore it. That's even worse. I wonder who is throwing the first curse, and will Draco arrive in time to stop the fight

schedule February 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 4. It's hard to stop after each chapter to review when I so desperately want to continue on to find out what will happen. My tears welled up a bit in this chapter in the middle. Poor Draco will be all alone, sending Scorpius away. It's nice of Pansy to stick by Draco like the good friend she must be. Pansy dating Ginny, first time I've come across that in a Drarry. I always like to read bits about Draco doing potions, thanks for including it. Some stories make it seem like they do nothing but each other, which really is not how life works. Thumbs up keeping it real