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for Gooey Melting Hearts

by Blackkitten23

person Smile317
schedule July 28, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Interested to see what Lily will say. Can't wait to see more of James and Severus together. Ingenious way to help out Lucius. Thanks for the update. 

schedule July 7, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Please update soon and post new chapters I want to see what they will do to help Lucius and I want to see what lily is up to 

person Smile317
schedule July 4, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Getting intriguing. Can't wait to see what happens. Thanks for the story

person Jan
schedule June 12, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Love this story, it's been a while but I loved catching up, can't wait for chapter 15, hope it's updated soon. 😊

person Smile317
schedule June 10, 2021 at 12:00 AM

I'm glad that you're still working on this. I can't wait to see where it goes. I'm happy that things are currently looking up for Severus. I'm a sucker for happy endings. Poor Lucius though. 😪 and still hoping Dumbledore gets his comeuppance.  Thanks for the update. 😁

person Smile317
schedule May 17, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Thanks for coming back. Good story. Like the sweet at the end. 

person Smile317
schedule April 21, 2021 at 12:00 AM

I'm glad you came back to the story. Can't wait to see how it all turns out. Thank you. 😊

person Jan
schedule December 4, 2020 at 12:00 AM

It's been a while, missed this story, please update chapter 12 and more soon.

person Jan
schedule July 29, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Oh Dumbledork what have you done.... please update chapter 11 soon.

person Jan
schedule May 12, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Lol, poor James...not, I’m guessing the other teen is Sirius? Can’t wait to see both the grandfather, and grandson’s reaction to seeing James and Sirius there, besides the obvious surprise that is. Lease update chapter 10 soon.