Wow. Lily is truly a scary piece of work. I'm glad Remus is doing better and like that Lyall and Gill are moving along nicely. This story definitely has a lot of moving parts. I always amazed at authors who can keep track of everything going on and tie it all together, a skill I sadly lack. Which is why I'm an avid reader not writer. Kudos to you. Great job.
What must Lucius do? Please update chapter 22 soon.
Interesting punishments. Things are starting to move forward. Would love to see more of James and Severus. Can't wait to see what happens next. Great job. ðŸ˜
Lol, I absolutely love Gill, he would make a perfect step daddy for Remus, please update chapter 21 soon.
Sweet chapter. Everything moving forward in a good way. Makes me nervous for what's to come. And I'd still like to see Lyall and Gill get together. ðŸ˜
Gil's becoming one of my favorite characters. Wonder what Mrs.Potters goons do, or say to Lily, please update chapter 20 soon.
Interesting pairing....Gill and Remus' father. Can't wait to see where that goes. I'm glad that Remus is getting help. Would like to see that cuddle between James and Severus. And still wondering about Dumbledore. Thanks for the story. ðŸ˜
Very interesting chapter. Hopefully Lyall takes it to heart and makes some changes. Still waiting on a comeuppance for Dumbledore. And more moments with Severus and James. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Somehow I don't think Lily is going to take her letter very well. Hopefully the letter to the Potters is much better. 😊. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Please update chapter 17 soon.