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for Gooey Melting Hearts

by Blackkitten23

person Smile317
schedule March 22, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Things are getting interesting. And James did find a way to sneak in a kiss. 😜. Lily is very slippery. Can't wait for next chapter. 

person Jan
schedule March 14, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Hope Gill gets to Severus before he takes his potion. Please update chapter 27 soon.

person Smile317
schedule March 2, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Wow. This just keeps adding on the layers of intrigue. It's starting to make my head spin keeping track of it all. Can't wait to see what happens next 

person Jan
schedule February 20, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Can't wait for chapter 26

person Smile317
schedule February 14, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Lots of good stuff in this chapter. 😁. Yay to Gill and Lyall finally getting a kiss. Now we just need to keep it going. Very interesting and ingenious way to track Lily's movements.  And had to laugh at poor James's predicament with the stag. Hopefully it works out for him in the end. Can't wait to see what happens next. 

person Jan
schedule January 21, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Lmao, poor James, but I love that he didn't mind being Severus pillow, please update chapter 25 soon.

person Jan
schedule January 20, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Can't wait for chapter 24!

person Smile317
schedule January 20, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Wow. That was a surprise at the end. Had me worried for a moment. Can't wait to see what's under Lily's bed. Thanks for the update. 

person Smile317
schedule December 31, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Back to school. Things should get interesting once everyone is back together again on a daily basis. I also like things starting to heat up between Lyall and Gill. Great story. 😁

person Jan
schedule December 12, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Oh I'm truly loving this pairing, the way Gill and Lyall interact is refreshing and so cute, it'd be nice to read more on them. Please update chapter 23 soon.