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for Gooey Melting Hearts

by Blackkitten23

person Smile317
schedule May 25, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Whew!  Almost made my heart stop. Had to skim down to see what happened and when it turned out okay, then went back and read the details. Thank goodness it was golems 😳. Also had to remind myself that Bellatrix is good in this story. Things are starting to heat up though and I definitely don't trust that Peter won't find something out and pass it on. Keeping me on my toes. Can't wait for the next chapter. 😊

schedule May 21, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Awww now that's sweet and funny I love how James is always being dragged away 🤣  I'll need more ofthis soon and I'd love to see our dog get his feelings  out in the open too  and see what path  it takes. 

person Smile317
schedule May 17, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Awww. I love the romance in the air. And I definitely agree with Regulus that it would be cute if everyone were dating 😊. Your story is making me very happy. Can't wait to see what's next. 😁

person Jan
schedule May 12, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Have I mentioned before that I absolutely love Gill and Lyall together? I love reading about them and this chapter was absolutely yummy, please update chapter 32 soon. 

person Jan
schedule May 9, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Finally Severus found out about James feelings. And can Gill and Lyall get any more cuter? I absolutely love them, they're so adorable together. Please update chapter 31 soon.

person Smile317
schedule May 9, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Loved this chapter but you know I love Lyall and Gill so it made me very happy. 😀 Though Lily is starting to get out of hand. She needs to be taken down.  Can't wait for next chapter. 

person Smile317
schedule May 1, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Interesting way to conduct a horcrux hunt.  And I still love Lyall and Gill together. Can't wait for their date. 😁

person Smile317
schedule April 20, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Still like Lyall and Gil together 😁. Poor Severus, all the body aches. And now time for his brain to ache too, thinking about James. Still not sure if the adults are rooting for the relationship or not. 

person Jan
schedule April 11, 2022 at 12:00 AM

I can't wait for chapter 29 and more, just love how everything's playing out. 

person Smile317
schedule April 8, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Things are starting to get complicated.  Great story.