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for Gooey Melting Hearts

by Blackkitten23

person Jan
schedule August 9, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Absolutely loved the ending.

schedule July 22, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Absolutely adored this!! It was so good!! I couldn't put it down!  Thank you so much! 

person Smile317
schedule June 30, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Thank you so much for the epilogue. It wraps everything up so neatly and makes me sigh and be all gooey inside. Love the story and can't wait to see what you write next. Amazing. 😁🥰

person Smile317
schedule June 26, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Awww. Loved the end of the chapter. Is it the end of the story?  Epilogue?  Loved the story. Hope to see you write some more. 😁

person Jan
schedule June 25, 2022 at 12:00 AM

I hope there's a chapter 39 🥺

person Smile317
schedule June 22, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Yay. The war is over. Let the happily ever afters begin. 🥰. Love Lyall and Gill together. Can't wait to see what happens with Severus and James. Great story. 😁

person Smile317
schedule June 18, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Yay! Voldemort is gone. Though I could never be a spy. I give them props for being so brave. 😁. Poor James and Severus but at least Lily is caught too. So hopefully "happily ever afters" for everyone. 🥰

person Smile317
schedule June 14, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Uh oh. Just when they're getting to the end with Voldemort, Lily acts up. That's not right. Now who's she cursing and will they make it on time. Keeping me nervous. 

person Smile317
schedule June 10, 2022 at 12:00 AM

I like the "last time" section. Saves every having to jump back a page and read the end again. 😁. Looks like things are going to be coming to a head shortly.   Can't wait. and I imagine Lily can make anyone a little nutty. 🤪

person Smile317
schedule June 2, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Happy that romance is slowly progressing. But uh-oh. What is Lily going do?  Making me very nervous