Hermione is a perv, Neville is traumatized, Severus is remarkable. Hermione's joke and Neville's new bogart and solution made me cackle. Marvelous, simply marvelous. LMFAO I love the humor you sprinkled in.
Oh. So. Hot. I am highly recommending this lovely erotica!!
This was truly enjoyable. I read to destress and attempt to take a break and I was transported to a story that made me genuinely laugh. You are clever and original and I enjoy your writing style. Thanks and please keep up the writing you really put very creative spins in your stories â¤ï¸
This was a fun story to read! Hermione is one crazy woman!! Thanks for writing it!!
Loved this! More like this please... sexy, sexy Snape!
I’m standing here getting ready to write this review and I get the notification from AO3 that you started a new story. *Gasp. Heart eyes* I’m so excited. :)
Loved this ending (and I’m really not bothered by the open ends to my questions). I get the connection they had (with hearing his voice); I just kept expecting more because you always like to tease me with foreshadowing where I least expect it. (So now I just assume EVERYTHING means something more.)
This ending was so beautiful. I love that they found each other and were brought together by the Boggart. (And Neville.) #BoggartMeetCute
Fav lines:
“All I can say is, the Boggarts around here are getting a hell of a lot more action than the rest of us.”—Bahahaha! So true. Hogwarts Boggarts are such players.
He found her,” Hermione whispered, tears of joy shimmering in her eyes. “He did indeed.” —Gaaaah! This is so syrupy sweet I’m a sugar coma. I freaking love this parallel with the birds (throughout the whole story, not just here). So touching. And brilliant. Perfect ending <3 <3 <3
Now I’m off to read your new thing. (You certainly keep me on my toes.) But I couldn’t start it without saying how much I loved this <3
Baaaah! You’re getting up the chapters faster than I can write reviews.
I freaking loved the sensuality and the raw, visceral passion of this chapter. There was so much beautiful word porn here, and I found myself copying and pasting waaaaay too much. I had to narrow it down to my favorite favorites afterward.
“to share their secret interiors so openly.”—Unnnnh! Love this.
“Either that or he just happened to be particularly Boggarty in his sexual inclinations.”—Hahahaha! He so is :)
“her head pitching backwards as he began pumping,”—Stop throwing pitches at me when I’m trying to come!
(unsuccessfully trying to fortify herself with against the intensity of what was going on inside her.—Take out the “with” between herself and against.)
“he rendered the desk top malleable”—Yeeees! Also malleable is going in the word notebook. Malleable malleable malleable. It starts to sound totally insane if you say it enough.
“How could she call him ‘Professor’ when his tongue had almost taken root inside her most intimate opening?”—How indeed? What a most perfect question to ponder. And I absolutely loved “taken root inside her.” Delicious :P
“She nodded at what could only be described as an obelisk tenting his crotch”—Hahahah! Obelisks have never been sexier.
“tossing them aside as his erect cock ticked back and forth like some sort of erotic metronome.”—Fuck yes. He can keep time in me any day :P <— Me panting.
“And that sense was only heightened by the solid pressure that now urged her to open, that pressed her to accept him, that sought to fill her with fierce pleasure. Spreading herself wider, she reached down to touch the unique blend of soft and hard between her legs, guiding him gently into her resistance.”—Ah fuck! I love this sooooo much. The juxtaposition of hard and soft and the lovely poetic lines about opening and resistance were fucking beautiful.
“She naturally grabbed his wrists in return, locking them into the position of the unbreakable vow.”—This comparison to the unbreakable vow was brilliant.
“He was hitting a spot deep inside her, awakening what felt like a dormant organ, nudging it into life, making it spark and flare with a wellspring of power, previously untapped.”—Yaaaas! Cervical power!
“I may be that fortunate.”—Awwwwww! I’m melting :0
Strident—word notebook.
So now I’m curious what’s going to happen with Snape and the boggart. Are they going to merge in some kind of magical ceremony? Does he just have to take his power back (through intention)? Did the boggart come when Snape did? What was going on when she heard Snape’s voice in her room? Seminal transference?
So sexually satisfied yet so many questions remain :)
Good lord! That’s were you decided to leave this chapter??! I’m dying of antici...
...pation. Doesn’t feel so good eh? 🤣 Sincerely hope that that wasn’t the end because damn it if I’m not begging for more.
Hopefully we can both keep it at bay :/ - let's hope, tho in my case my hope is dispelled a bit by bit :( I did however found a bit of time to scribble few words :*
In short, I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! (yup, I'm jelling :D )
It is so tender, romantic, heartbreaking and hot, all-in-one.
Snape's lack of reactions was so amusing, I was thinking "poor guy he doesn't know how to react" all the way to the end. It is also interesting to see how much he changed.
It was funny how she realised that her "boggart" wasn't boggart at all :D
Then he surprised her by quirking one dark eyebrow. “You just thought that I might want to . . . what?” - love this <3 and all that follows.
And now I'm going to the next chapter
Love&Hug&Kisses
Hermines tension from the last chapter is almost gone. An here she is, still herself careing for the feelings of the supposed boggard but also acting like a real Gryffindor facing her fear, telling straight what she wands. Can it be? Is he also attracted by her? Can he come undone by her bold actions? I hope so ;-) The interactions between Hermine and the real Snape are even more exiting.
And what about Neville, hope he is gone, not listening. Otherwise i think he get's a heart attack.
Thank you for writing. I cant wait to read more of this exiting plot.