So happy to see Severus pushing the vengeance envelope! I know we are supposed to be civilized people, but I know what I would want to do if someone in my family were harmed.
Thank god for two chapters because just posting the one would have been mean!
I've been meaning to comment for a while and I keep forgetting. So I left myself a post it note reminding to do so. I just wanted to say that I'm loving this story and the thought of Snape with a baby in his arms mid lesson does weird things to my ovaries but I've got a horrible feeling in the pit of my stomach that something bad is coming...
I’ve only just found your story, but I’m loving it. Please continue, I need to see where it goes. (Plus more lemons will always be welcome) xx
Beautiful chapter. The whole proposal scene is so romantic. Didn’t expect anything less from Severus. As for the future chapters, would be nice to see Severus getting overprotective over his little baby girl. Just a suggestion though.
I just got to read this in its entirety and I am loving their love and their little family. Thank you for sharing it! I must say I'm with Albus on the bet. lol I look forward to more of her reunions and also to her maiming Kingsley! Thank you!! HG4eva
This is turning into a great story. I cannot wait to see where it all goes. I like that you add the personal back ground helps bringing in the readers to the story more. I can truly say that those of us close at work do talk to each other the way Hermione talks to the muggles in navy. I look forwad to seeing what Severus' errands were before they departed America; also I am looking for more lemons first one was great!
This is a nicely original take on H/S (though I could have done without the rape, and find myself hoping that Severus pays the jail a visit before they leave). Perhaps just the tiniest bit saccharine, but sometimes you need that with these two. Keep going!
I think you’re doing a great job with this story and I know how important it is for the author to keep receiving reviews (I know it definitely is for me) so here it is. Can’t get enough of it. Really enjoyed how she described her baby girl. Had me thinking about my little one when he was one year old. Definitely waiting for some lemons, but even more, to see where the story line will take us. What do you think, will it be just short and sweet or are you planning to make it more of an adventure?