Finished :) such a fun and adorable story! I will say this, I rarely start a story that isn’t marked “complete”. Too many people just stop halfway through. I’m so glad you finished. This is truly one of my favorite tales of Snape and Hermione! Loved the addition of a daughter. This could easily been longer and I wish it was so I didn’t have to stop reading! I think you found your groove midway through, and it finished very strong. Maybe run the story through Grammerly before posting so it will catch the majority of the spelling and grammar mistakes. That website is a godsend for me. Loved loved loved the proposal and the wedding! Snape getting his revenge on the men was fucking fantastic. I love seeing the “old Snape” coming out in terms of proctecting his girls. I think that is so realistic in how the man is in love and changes, but when needed the dark fire returns. Thank you so much for such a great story :) I’m sorry I didn’t review as you were writing, givenmy wait until it’s complete to start reading rule. But now, i’ll look out for more of your stories in the future though! :) cheers!
Only half way through the story but I just love this :) my favorite fanfic couple and it’s awesome to have a story of their happy ending and not just their journey of falling in love. First one I’ve read where there’s a child, and that dynamic brings out the best in snape :) I love it! Also the Egypt seen - bloody fantastic!
Excellent bit of swearing there!
Aww, you cheated, he missed passing the afterbirth!! I like Silas, a good wizard name.
I will be cackling over this for a bit! Hee!
I forgive you after that chapter!
OMG Noooooo!! 😱😱 I’ve been following this story from the beginning and just keep forgetting to review! I’ve loved the entire story and can’t wait for the next update! Just when I thought it was a smooth sail to the end: Plot. Twist.
Oh he did karaoke?? I can imagine!!
Oh this is mean!! You only get married for the first time once!!
Can't believed you stopped it there! MEAN!
Happily ever after!! Is it a boy or a girl??
He deserved everything Severus gave him. Very much looking forward to finding out how Snape is going to cope with a pregnant Hermione, a toddler and a wedding :)