Omggg great
Absolutely excellent story. Keep it going.
I only discovered this yesterday and have read all your chapters so far. I'm really enjoying it thank you 😊
I only discovered this yesterday and have read all your chapters so far. I'm really enjoying it thank you 😊
So glad to see you back! I was worried this was another great story doomed to be left off! Please continue, I really enjoy your writing!
awesome story - hope you update soon
So amazing so far! You have a real talent for creating a scene. Extremely well done, very much looking forward to update!! Terrific job!
Rawr. So utterly infuriating and yet so blissfully logical. You've done a fine job of assembling a rather brilliant story here. It's delicious. And the way he is tantrically exposing her to things...delish. Do pen us some more sooner rather than later. When they finally get down to it, I can only imagine how exquisite it will be. You've characterized them both exceedingly well. Great work!
Hi! I loved your story so far! The rythm is good, and the fluidity too. Good job, can't wait for the next chapter!
Well, I must say that for my first fanfiction read, I've really gotten a jolt. Love your style... Enough story with the *ahem* to pique the senses! I can only imagine how much poorly written stuff is out there from horny kids, and you're not that obviusly, and neither am I.
I hope your summer was a good one... So when might I find your next chapter?!