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for A War Hero's Holiday Plot

by emerald_sparrow

person shsa0702
schedule January 2, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Loved this!  This story was wonderfully done with just the right amount of romantics to coincide with the smutiness.  I have to admit the giggle water and the effects thereafter on Hermione had me giggling, it was one of my favorite parts!  Even though your story says Oneshot, I find myself craving to know what follows afterwards.  Perhaps consider a continuation?  Regardless, this was wonderful.  Thank you!

schedule December 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I like your story. 👍🏼 Short but sweet.  But, why are they dating in secret?