I love it. Don't worry if people think its vanilla, not everything needs needs to be sex and kink, although that is good to.
sweet update
beautiful
interesting
Well, that was a twist I didn't see coming; him caring about her enough for it to be his vision. I find it fun that she is so confused by his actions and his back and forth reactions and statements. Thanks for the updates and I look forward to more. HG4eva
I loved the opening chapter. Now we have Ron behaving badly and the end of their relationship. I'm looking forward to some Dramione time, not kiss-regret back and forth. Good job for a first fic
Really good start, looking forward to more.
I am surprised that this is your first fan fiction. It's quite well written so far.
An interesting beginning and an intriguiing Draco. I hope this Hermione is strong and fiesty in the end. Looking forward to your next update. Thank you! HG4eva