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for ONE LIFE TO LIVE

by Mistress

schedule November 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

😥 Something tells me Severus’s story is worse than I could imagine. Even in the books, I always thought Albus was a manipulative bastered. 

schedule October 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Poor Cissy😞! I wouldn’t be so calm or forgiven. Lucius would be in a lot of pain if I were Cissy. How dare he say he loved her after everything? He was willing to hand her over to Severus! Now that his girlfriend is dead, he claims to love her. I can’t be too angry with Severus because his choice was done out of love for both Lucius and Cissy. And James😡. I hope he get something worse than a killing curse. 

schedule October 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Another great chapter. I never did like Lily much. As for Sirius, he was always so cocky without having done anything to earn his big ego 😡. I like your version of a nice Malfoy. 

schedule October 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Poor Severus! 😭Who did that to him! 😤 

I don’t mind sad stories as long as there is a happy ending. I always thought Albus was a manipulative bastard! I haven’t read the books in a while, but did he ever make a plan for the truth to come out after his death? Had Severus not given Harry his memories, would anyone have known the truth about all his sacrifices? Lily wasn’t worth it in my opinion.  Hermione is worth it!  

Thank for another great chapter!

schedule October 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Poor Crooks! What a brave 🐱.