Great plot! Love how you're keeping tom and hermione true to their own personalities and characteristics! Can't wait for more!
This was a really good story. I can't wait to read more!
omg please update desprit for more
I usually don’t start to read stories with only a couple of chapters for fear that the writer will stop writing but this one intrigued me. I really like and can’t wait to see where the story goes.
RE: chapter one of Remorse by Bithya
Question: At the beginning of the chapter you listed Orion Black as being 17 years old, and in 5th year... shouldn't he, at that age, be in 7th year?
I was not expecting Dumbledore to tell Hermione that if she stays in the past longer than one year she will die. Total bummer. :(
I'm looking forward to reading additional chapters.
Well done - keep up the good work. :)
*-*-* F.Y.I. errors found needing correction: 1) 'Unlike her, he already had been down her, many years ago, ....' ["been down her" ought to be "been down here"]; 2) '... Hermione discovered that the painting had to be some kind of portray, hanging about as high as her own head.' ["portray" ought to be "portrait"]; 3) '"... Time does now allow anyone to stay for a longer period. ...."' ["does now allow" ought to be "does not allow"]