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for Prick Thee to Thy Bone

by Snowway32

schedule June 20, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Absolutely Positively DELICIOUS! I love it! You are doing a great job! I can't wait to read the next! 

person JT11
schedule November 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Beautifully written! I love the poetic descriptions. ❤️ I’m new to this site. How to I get alerts that you’ve updated? I don’t want to miss any new chapters! :D

person CDGaymer
schedule October 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Good chapter. Interesting where this one will go, and to see if it will follow somewhat like canon or if you speed it up a bit.

Here is a suggestiong, you could always do both and give Voldie a shapeshifting quality. One look (the older looking but more human one) for Harry alone and the other look (more snake like) for the lowly followers.

schedule October 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

So lovely! The dark depth of this story continues to captivate me. I'm excited to see where you take this story, and to see which story you get to adopt (I'm crossing my fingers and hoping it's Harry Potter and the Breeding Darkness). Personally, I enjoy both versions of Voldemort: handsome elegance and snake faced evil. However, keeping the red eyes is always a request of mine. Since you already have Marvolo as the handsome elegance (with red eyes, I love you), I think going for the snake face for the Dark Lord would be perfect. Either way, I'm excited to read your next chapter!

schedule September 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This is amazing! This is exactly the kind of story I've been looking for! I love when an author delves into the psychology of the characters,  particularly when said character is dark and twisted. I've been searching for a good Harry/Tom story that I can find believable, one that convinces me that this is real. So far, you have been perfect! I can't wait for the next chapter!

person CDGaymer
schedule September 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

interesting, cant wait to see where it leads

schedule September 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I am intranced!! I've always loved when Harry is written dark and or vendictive. This a good welcome back to writing! Am hoping this is going to be updated at least semi regularly. I know real life has a tendency to get in the way of things like that, but here's to hoping!

Kitty5tatts

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