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for Plan B

by SickPuppy

schedule November 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Yay! It's very pretty isn't it? Whenever I go into the Forbidden Planet nearest to me I drool over the one they have in the display case. I want it (and actually do need it for something I'm doing.) Ooh, now I want to know what you've changed, and I'm frantically googling wood meanings which are not my area of expertise. 

Of course Severus was going to figure it out, he's brilliant! And now I'm feeling so heartbroken for Harry. Poor baby. :( And of course the Ministry will continue to be arseholes, oh dear, what are they going to do now? 

schedule November 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Yay Snape to the resuce! If anyone was going to work out that it was really Harry it had to be Snape. Can't wait for the next chapter

schedule November 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Yay, thanks for giving Harry some happiness this chapter! Even if it was fleeting. Hopefully that guy will be back again.

I was confused about whether he was the real Severus or not. I'm thinking... not? But I liked the ambiguity, and it keeps me wondering what's going to happen next, and when and how the real Sev is going to enter the picture.

Can't wait for more!

schedule November 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I hoped that it would be Snape but I don't know if it really was him or not. I so want it to be but you're sneaky like that. There's a sinking feeling in my stomach that the Ministry are out to try and trip him up. If I don't say it enough I hate them!

schedule November 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

*raises hand* I did! Although I wasn't about to get my hopes up! *mutters about JKR not telling us what Severus' wand actually is* I don't care what it looks like in the films! I was discussing this with my friend on Tuesday and came up with silver birch, she rowan or yew. Ebony would be a bit too obvious... I like your take on it! 

Anyway, yay Harry getting good sex! Has Severus already figured out that he's the 'real' Harry yet? And what will those bastards at the Ministry do next? Grrr.... 

schedule October 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Yay, you're back! I was hoping to get some more of this story, as depressing as it is at the moment.

What can I say that hasn't already been said? The Ministry is a bunch of dicks. Ron's a hypocritical bastard. And I just hope Harry can surive all this until something good finally happens.

The only bright spots here are Kreacher and Hermione. Kreacher is especially adorable. I loved his present!

Looking forward to what's next! And also, shameless plug, I'll be posting a new chapter of Unstoppable soon, hopefully today, so check it out!

schedule October 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Yay! 2 chapters! but boo poor Harry! 

and Oh God Ron! oO Not sure how you get over that...

Hope you're okay you've been MIA for a while :)

schedule October 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Bastards! Double bastards! *snarls* Poor Harry, they are so awful to him. :( My wand hand is itching, although I might just end up strangling someone. Ron is looking like a good candidate for that, you utter Hippogriff! Although I'm glad Hermione is still onside. I always knew she was cool. 

Yay double update! Don't worry about not updating, I know life gets in the way of all the fun things we want to do, (I know it does for me.) 

Aww, I'm happy to wait. :) I hope Angst gets her technical issues sorted, not having a computer sucks. 

schedule October 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Haha well what can I say? I'm pretty familiar with your work by this point. Plus you've been dropping hints throughout the fic. Harry thinks about Snape a lot, and it's always with a complex set of emotions behind it. I get that it's a long ways off but I'm looking forward to when he makes an appearance.

This chapter was rough. It sickens me the lengths the Ministry will go to hurt and humiliate Harry, treating him like less than a human being because of his sexual orientation and the fact that he's doing the only thing he can to survive. All I can say is, Harry better get his in the end, or I will be very upset (Take that as the warning it is, by all means).

I liked that you softened it a bit at the end with the smut. Yes, an unusual pairing, but I enjoyed it. Will Neville be making a reappearance?

schedule October 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I have read them, Snarry fan fiction and Evanescence lyrics? Yes please! Two of my favourite things! (I will drag my sorry hide over there and review them, I saw this had been updated and rushed to read it!) 

Harry and Neville? Aww, that's so sweet! *squees* I might have guessed they'll be more arseholery, I'll have to practice my Avada Kedavra skills with the amount of people I'm going to want to kill, aren't I? 

Thank you, tell them I'm begging them to finish it. I'll go down on my knees if I have to. :D I still don't get the robin I ended up with, but it must be right, Pottermore was right about me being a Hufflepuff! (I always suspected I was.)