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schedule September 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Pushed off of the stove is RIGHT!! I can't wait for Lucius to realize just how Wrong he is!!!

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schedule September 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

So this is a really interesting story so far.  I like how you are depicting each of the characters and I love how Hermione is open and free to explore this newly discovered part of herself.

schedule September 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

You had me glued to my phone instead of my online homework!! I'm loving it!

schedule September 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh wow. That chapter stood up the the anticipation, and I don't get to say that often about stories involving the lifestyle! While part of me is disappointed that there wasn't a lemon in this chapter  (the state of my knickers is a testament to that part), another part is thrilled because one: it means plotline in what looks to be a captivating story (looks to be, pfsh, IS) and two: you're providing us with a dominate who has limits and guidelines he holds himself to, which is hard to find in real life, nonetheless a fictional story when rainbows and butterflies can pop out of the woodwork to turn what should be an abusisive situation into happily ever after.

Thank you for your determination to stay true to the lifestyle. I've been a submissive of one degree or another for about 10 years with the same Dominate. We even work with a online group to try and educate those interested in the lifestyle to keep everyone safe, sane, and consentual. If you cross a line, I will let you know. But at the same time, part of the joy of fiction is that it doesn't always have to aline with reality, lol.  I can't wait for chapter 4!

schedule September 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Tricky tricky, teasing me like that, lol! I can't wait for the next chapter 

schedule September 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wow!! She hasn't even seen the playroom yet!  That's a Gryffindor :)

Dominant Hib is reminiscing...  I was the first top for a lot of new people.

schedule September 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Nice.  Poor Hermione. What a dismal sexual history. I wonder if there is anyone out there who can satisfy her. 😉 Looking forward to the next chapter. 

schedule September 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This looks like it could be an awesome story, I can't wait to see what you do next! And kudos on addressing the initial "oh shit, what's wrong with me?!" Moment most people have when they first discover that bdsm and D/s trip their trigger.