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for One brick at a time

by Cheichei87

person Anon
schedule October 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I get the feeling that, in the words of the old Lee Greenwood song, "And when we touch, baby don't you know; it won't be touch and go, it's gonna be touch and go crazy."

^_^

person MotekElm
schedule October 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

excellent shower scene!

schedule October 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I personally like the direction. Can never go wrong with Dramione action!  Now, will they be teammates or rivals at trivia night?

schedule October 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I am glad she's getting some of her backbone on and letting herself grow. She's not the old Hermione, and she needs to learn who the new one is, without putting restraints on herself. I love it! I also like that Draco defended her, and then ogled her. lol Thanks! HG4eva

person MotekElm
schedule October 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

nice

schedule October 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I’m quite enjoying this story. Yes to Dramione flirting!

person dyokeley
schedule September 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I literally LOVE this story and I check back everyday for an update. I really hope that you see it to the end. I know people get busy but the wait is a killer. lol LOVE it!

schedule September 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Very good, so glad to see the story updated. 

schedule September 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Thank you for the update!! I am sorry had to have that run-in with Draco on the first night, but I was VERY glad they both were civil, he was helpful, and she accepted his advice and shared a bit of herself. I also truly loved the flashback to Hermione and Ginny's conversation and fun. She needs more fun and girl-time in her life more often. :-)  Thanks! HG4eva

schedule September 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I like that he only teased her, and in a nice way, before leaving her alone with her thoughts. I wonder about all of his changes, too... As for her, I hope she finds what she needs at Hogwarts, as she seems to be completely lost. Thank you, HG4eva