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by Cheichei87

person dyokeley
schedule January 24, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I keep checking back to see if you have added more. No luck. Its a good story. Dont give up on it. Hope you are doing well and its not your health and just writers block that is keeping us from more. :) 

schedule December 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Nice. Looking forward to more.

schedule December 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I lige you writing style and look forward to reading more 

person MotekElm
schedule December 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Good update. Now I REALLY want the next chapter soon!

person Michala
schedule December 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I love that the Weasly Twins were brought up, although a little disappointed that we didn't fond out his the Weaslys punish cheating. I think I speak for everyone when I say that we need the next chapter now!

schedule December 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

'Casual, but got my shit together' look. Haha. I strive to achieve this look IRL, but somehow fall short. 

Can’t wait to see these two get together. It was a fun little chapter. 

 

person Michala
schedule December 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I am loving the flirty fun of this story, can't wait for the next chapter.

person cpetnm
schedule November 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

It's so fun to see their flirty interactions.  I look forward to the new chapter.

schedule October 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

What lines they're crossing... um all of them?! lol I am enjoying their flirtations immensely and look forward to the dam of tension breaking. :-) Thank you, HG4eva

schedule October 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Really cute so far