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by Thunderbird

schedule October 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Nice chapter with some very sweet Ronmione and some very lemony Ronmione!  Like I said, it’s kind of rare, so it’s even more precious. 

schedule October 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh now you have me really thinking about what I have been right about. I know things will get better for harry, Draco, and teddy. They will find a good grove on the routine. Ves is a hard one to figure out. I think I figure her out and then you turn it upside down on me. I really hope that Ron stays with the teaching the training of the Auroras. That is a safe job for now. But I think they will pull him from teaching when things start getting hairy with dark wizards. Don't really hear much Malfoy senior. Which is a good thing. I don't think Draco could handle that Drama with dear old dad. I for see in a few chapters that harmineo is going to gave a baby before her and Ron will get married. Harry and Draco will adopt a baby girl. Andromeda will move with them to be close to teddy. Cissy will move down the road from them and put Malfoy manor up for sale. Hey maybe I'm right or maybe I'm wrong time will tell. Now to think about what I have been right about so far. *thinking cap goes on*

schedule October 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Love! Can't wait for more.

schedule October 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

You are so mean on this one. I started to tear up. But I am loving the story. Can't wait for more to come. It kills me on the long waits for the story. Drives me mad. Got to have my fix now that you have sucked me in the story. I can't wait to see what happens next. I always like to think I have it figured out and then you prove me wrong. I like that. I will have to keep guessing to see if I have it right. But I know you will prove me wrong each time. I do have a theory on harry and Draco. I am thinking that they will have another little one down the road. I have to have something to read for the next 6 moths since I have a little one on the way

schedule October 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh they are too cute as a little family unit! I just want to wrap Teddy up in a blanket and make it all better for him. It's not fair he's lost too much. 

schedule October 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I wish I could tell you!

schedule October 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch8 - Well, that was unexpected! I was happy I knew what was going on in this chapter - Vesper building a nice relationship with Declan, and then you throw Blaise into the mix! And I was interested by one piece of phrasing, that Blaise had left Vesper. Maybe it was just the way you wrote it, but it intrigued me, nonetheless. And as for the sex, smutty, and still plot based with Blaise saying he missed Vesper. Past tense, not present. So, is he over her (clearly not), or does he think they're back together? Or am I reading too much into one word?! SP

schedule October 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

No you are sucking me in more and more on this. I have thoughts on Vesper and Blaife. I think they are going to get back together and we will finally learn why the split. Hey I'm glad that Draco likes giving Ron a hard time. It shows that they are going to be friends. Can't wait to read more of the story. Killing me with the long wait man. Need my Drarry fix alot more. You are a damn good writer. 

schedule October 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This chapter was so bitter sweet. I've known many people who fall back on an ex simply because it's familiar. As much as I was rooting for Vesper and Blaise in SMN, I'm defiantly rooting for Declan this time around. I was hoping to find out why they broke up (Draco's info could be a misleading tidbit after all), but it was still a wonderful chapter. After reading fanfics for so long (i cant name the years), I've learned there are many times it's better I don't get what I want in a story because the author tells it much better than I do, lol

schedule October 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Just finished reading chapter 7. I love how you’ve written Draco and Harry’s relationship as well as Ron and Hermione’s. As much as I have become a Dramione fan, I also like Ron and Hermione, and it’s difficult to find a story where their relationship is sweet and successful. Of course, she hasn’t told him about her parents yet, so that is a concern. I expect that will cause some trouble, and that worries me.