I love the break that they got. I think that it opened up more about what their life was like before Teddy and before Draco starting the healing practice. I love where this story has gone and is going. Thank you for your advice, I never thought about it like that so maybe I will try some shorts because my first story is about 20 pages single spaced in Word and there really isn't a break for chapters in it. I mainly get all mixed up with how I want to word things and how my words actually turn out. It's quiet frustrating, but maybe that can be fixed somewhat with shorts. I'm glad your director liked it, that justifies you not writing any with this story for three months lol. Even though I don't know what it was about, I had a feeling that your director would like it because your writing style is loved by a lot of people on here. :)
A double helping of Unstoppable and A Secondary Education - YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh these boys melt my heart. They are so bloody adorable.
I'm impressed that they lasted until 4 to check in on Teddy.
Looking forward to more! Oh and you have inspired me to just write more of Redemption regardless of the drought, I just need to get through this week from hell...
It is about time you are back. I am happy that you are back. I enjoyed the chapter with Vesper. This chapter with Monie gives a new insite to her. I really want her to get to the bottom of what happened to her parents but I also want her to pull her head out of ass and tell Ron, Harry, and Draco what happened to them. Ron can help get to the bottom of it. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. Don't leave me hanging for another 3 months. I have been missing your updates
Did I take the hint that Gensler modified the water that Hermione put her tea-bag in?
Whitmore
This was an interesting chapter. Seeing that things went at least most of the way as planned was a different view of how things usually go and I liked it. I didn't expect Ron to get injured but it adds more to the story and a little better understanding of what happened the first time. Know I really can't wait until Robard gets whats coming for him, if anything. And of course if the lecture and warning weren't from Hermione, it would have been from Harry. Harry seems a lot less "quick to anger" but would still do whats necessary for Ron and Hermione both. I wonder if he's going to get involved with diminishing the last of the Death Eaters and if he does, what Draco is going to say about it. But for right now i'm super excited for the romance and parenting break for Draco and Harry's anniversary. (Teddy is amazing and a great addition don't get me wrong, but every parent needs a break time and again.) I can't wait!
Honestly, for a while now I hit writers block and haven't gotten anywhere with the 3 stories that I started. I think it because all the stories I was reading weren't being updated so I went back to the first fanfic story I read, which of course was SMN, and that"s what promted me to review again for you. You've become my inspiration and seeing your story when it's updated always brightens my day. :) I hope you are of good health and that your editor loved your script you completed recently. (It is your editor right?)
Hermione had greater restraint than I would have done if I found myself being male for a moment. I am so excited about the next chapter, I've missed the boys.
Yea I am in the process of writing the next chapter, but I got stuck so I've written a oneshot, but I've not finished that yet either. But this week has been crazy at work so I haven't actually had a chance to write much.
Yay!!!! I'm glad you're back! I was struggling for good stories to read and now you're back with Unstoppable so I am very happy. Can't wait for more as usual.
OH I HAVE MISSED YOU!!!! I truly love the way you write so I'm betting that the script you wrote is great. All things that take a while to create are :). Of course Dempsey needed to be kept. There has to be at least one arrogant person in each story right? I really love the way that Vesper and her uncle were able to talk since Kemp is in a way i guess you could say nuetral, but also cares more than any friend because of his role in her life. I can't wait to read about what Vesper decides about both men. Hermione is actually going to find the person who put her parents in the hospital? She's always been real smart but I'm interested to see what kind of trouble she gets into (if any at all). You have been my inspiration and I can't wait to read more of your work.
I miss you! Your my inspiration! I really hope everything is ok? I can't wait to hear about Vesper and her assignment!
Well I can't believe I got it right on this chapter. I hope that Draco understands that he needs to try and be home more to help Harry. Draco is an ass in this chapter. In this chapter he made me see him as the brat from the books. I am surprised that Harry didn't hit him for what he said. I would have. If my husband talked to that I would have slapped him. Harry needs time away from the house. Maybe he should go stay at the Burrow. Maybe then Draco would understand what Harry does for the house and Teddy. I have a feeling that Draco is going to tell Harry about Hermine's parents. The Harry is going to tell Ron and shit is going to hit the fan with her and Ron