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for Unstoppable

by Thunderbird

schedule February 1, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Just wanted to say I thought this was a perfect sequel to Say My Name. I know you’re not working on this right now but I really loved the relationships and dynamics in the story. I particularly loved seeing Hermione and Ron developing into a mature relationship as I don’t often read that in fics (I love them together but as a background couple to Harry/Draco). I hope to see the wedding someday. I’m guessing the storylines will converge around the Green Adders at some point - I imagine Harry and Draco would be pretty big targets for neo- Death Eaters. Anyway, great work and thanks for posting.

schedule December 14, 2018 at 12:00 AM

"happening alot faster" its been months MONTHS please please PLEASE tell me you did not abadon it

schedule November 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Updates will be happening faster?!?!

REALLY!?!?

three months

THREE MONTHS!!!!!!!

did you ,did you     ..abandon it?

schedule August 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

So happy to see you’re back to writing! I really like the inner conflict for both Vesper and Hermione and I loved how you’ve put them together as a comparison. It is interesting to see how much this is impacting on Hermione as she’s not as “need to know” as she normally is. I’m excited to see where it goes and I can’t wait for Ron to find out but I also don’t want him to get hurt. Thanks again for taking time out to write :) 

schedule August 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I MISSED YOU!!!!! I always think of this story and second education. I'm glad your back. This chapter was interesting. Ves was going to talk about the abortion was she? I can't wait to find out what's going on with the case and if she lets Harry and Draco know whats going on as well as talk to Blaise about everything.

schedule August 3, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Just caught up with this story... loving it! Keep it coming! (And my suggestion for the honeymoon would be Italy... I’m not sure why, it just seems to suit them) x

schedule July 31, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Just caught up with this story... loving it! Keep it coming! (And my suggestion for the honeymoon would be Italy... I’m not sure why, it just seems to suit them) x

schedule June 11, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Please don't send them to Paris. Lately it seems like every story I'm reading has someone visiting or residing in Paris. What about the beach. Any beach. Maybe the Carribean? Or a Hot Springs resort type thing.

As for the chapter, I love how in depth you went and how much Harry's and Narcissa's relationship has grown. Lot's of amazing points were hit on. I love how Harry is really beginning to see how many people he still has in his life that want to help out.

Yay!!! I missed Hermione and Ron.

schedule May 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Your Draco/Harry chapters make me so giddy lol. I'm glad things are working out for them. I can't wait to find out more about Ves/Blaise and if the pregnancy had anything to do with their break up. Also can't wait to read about the other pregnant girl (name has slipped my memory lol). I love your stories (forgot to review SE :(. I'll leave one with the next chapter, promise.) I can't wait for more!

schedule May 10, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I had to make an account just so I could leave a review. I get in the mood for fanfics every now and then, mainly so I can read all the smutty things. I read though Say My Name and Unstoppable over the course of about 3 days, staying up late, not paying attention in meetings, etc. Your writing is fantastic! I am so involved in all the characters and the way you've grown them from the original series. I am hooked and cannot wait to read more!