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by Thunderbird

schedule September 7, 2021 at 12:00 AM

I have now managed to read everything that you have posted on here and I am riveted and cannot wait for the next chapter. I have no idea what to read in the interim or even if I want to read anything else while I wait. 

I think of all your stories this one is the most frustrating, but in a good way. The slow burn, the different POVs that take you to another part when you just want to know what happens next. But most frustrating is Hermione. I have found myself screaming at my phone while I read begging her to tell Vesper all about it as that would solve everything. 

Please write again soon. 

I await the next installment with baited breath. 

schedule July 23, 2020 at 12:00 AM

So I have been following along with everything you've been posting, and enjoying in thoroughly, but I haven't taken the time to compliment you as I should. As always, I love your stories. I love your imagination and your vision of the lives these characters have taken on after canon ended. I recently found myself watching the final scene from Deathly Hallows somewhere and thinking, "Oh yeah, that's what JK thought happened." Your stories are so real and alive in my head that her ending caught me by surprise.

I go back to your stories over and over again, I wanted you to know. I find comfort in the way you have written Harry and Draco, and during a time when I'm very much alone (besides my kids, which doesn't count), their magnetism and love helps me feel like there is hope. And it's not even just about Drarry either. I LOVED the way Narcissa confronted Harry about asking for help and how much her and Molly love him. Normally I connect with Draco more, but in that moment, I was Harry - doing it all myself and forgetting that if I ask for help, it'll be there. The motherly love, the friendship, all of it. Right in the feels. 

I am genuinely looking forward to reading the wedding vows, the reaction to seeing each other's rings (finding out the color of Draco's essence), and the wedding night. I hope Draco got enough sleep on shift to make it a doozy. I'm so grateful for your willingness to write and share this. You have a gift. I could go on and on about all the details that I love, but it's pretty much everything, so I'll just leave it at this: Thank you.

schedule July 9, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Omg omg omg!!! This chapter totally could have continued and I would have been totally fine!!! I haven't been on here for a while and was very glad to see this chapter pop up. I can't wait till Mila has her baby boy!! And to hear the vows!! And their trip!! And teddy!!! And maybe a little interaction between Blaise and vesper. Just to see how they act around everyone else. Omg!!! And I've still been following this story on AO3. 

Im hoping to have the first chapter of my story edited by the end of this weekend (as long as marital issues don't get in the way). And I understand about the summer. My mom was a para and needed income during the summer. All is well health wise here. I hope all is well with you. Can't wait for the next chapter.

schedule June 21, 2020 at 12:00 AM

I love the story, keep up the good work! I really like the time and effort you’ve put 8nto the relationships and developing the characters as a whole. 

schedule May 28, 2020 at 12:00 AM

AAAHHHH! I'm so excited!!! I didn't know that you posted this chapter but I got a notification for another story that I started reading on here (even though it also is on ao3 and fanfiction.net) and was skimming through through to see if any other stories were updated here and that's when I saw yours! I was happy! Even though this chapter made my cry a little. I'm glad I can help with some of the motivation. I've been trying to find my own as well lately.

I've been redoing JADIP but it is slow going because something was happening with my computer and it was being stupid so I had to get a new one and now that I have a new one and am getting things going, my mom has decided to give me her laptop (which is a lot better) so I'm going to be transferring everything again. As for my drarry, I got three chapters done (which is half of a normal composition notebook) when I started having my other story edited so now I'm going back through and editing it again so that it's more descriptive and flows smoother. I don't have a beta for drarry so it's taking more time.

My fam is doing okay. My hubby finally got a job again and we are slowly getting back to normal with all ours bills and stuff. I hope everything is going okay for you. You had mentioned before that you are a teacher (I think). I hope everything has been okay for you.

person Anon
schedule May 26, 2020 at 12:00 AM

The truth will out.

After a while, at least. ^_^

schedule January 20, 2020 at 12:00 AM

OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!! I nearly screamed when i saw this. Im so excited!!! So the first question i had was is draco going to talk to harry about this because he knows that ves trusts harry as much (if not more than) draco? Next thing. It makes sense that if the green adders would want to reak havoc while doing something else to cause damage. Is there another party involved? Something that i have been wondering about is this. Is robbards a part of the green adders and no one knows? Will harry ever be told the truth about what is going on? Why wouldnt mac and ves just go to kingsley? Yeah hes the minister and its going over robbards head but everyone has to know the theories sooner or later right? Arg! So many questions that i have to wait for answers on! Lol! Oh and what about harry and draco chapters? I want to know how house life has been now that they have had a house elf for a while and not everything has been falling to harry (or at least not as much) and what about mila? Is the father of her baby someone who is associated with either the green adders or this other party if there is one? Lots of questions that i know will be answered in chapters to come but im to excited and needed to ask now lol.

schedule January 19, 2020 at 12:00 AM

So happy to see an update on this one!! Still loved reading your other works you have had going on though. 

person Anon
schedule January 19, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Ha-ha!  New chapter, and a brand-spanking new theory!  Love it.

schedule January 18, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Really glad you decided to continue this, I thought it was just another abandoned story, which would have been a pity because it's a good story.