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for Torment *Completed*

by Kvarta

schedule October 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

#41: yep, not mad that Hermione is mental. That just makes her more real. After fighting a war for so many years, you’re allowed to have issues. 

schedule October 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

#40: another great chapter. Those Malfoys are something else! So many secrets. Did Snape just smiled when Hermione came into the room? Is that good or bad? 🤔 I’m glad Hermione continues to stand up for herself. I’m waiting for them to push her too far, and run her off. Then Snape and the Malfoys can see how much they actually need and want her. Lots of groveling. 

schedule October 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This was fun to read after a long work week. 😂      Severus is wondering "Why is she so annoyed?" Well, it starts with Severus and ends with Malloy. Poor Hermione! I can see how a relationship will develop with these two. When you're that familiar with someone ....😈 I wouldn't mind giving Severus a bath either! Attitude and all!

 

schedule October 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

😂 another good chapter! I'm surprised he really hasn't killed her yet!

schedule October 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

What an amazing story! Even though none of these characters are likable, I can't help but want for them to succeed. They all have issues, which makes them more relatable. Don't abandon this story. I want to read it till the end!

person Mistress
schedule August 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM

So much pain and suffering. So... much... you're breaking my heart, girl. But I absolutely love it. Can't wait for him to wake up and see that there's still a chance for him to know what love is, to finally have someone there who cares for him. 

person Mistress
schedule August 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Absolutely loved the first chapter. It's heartbreaking to imagine this kind of child abuse, but in any case and specially in his, whatever doesn't kill us, only makes us stronger. Can't wait for the next one. Keep up the good work.