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by Kvarta

schedule November 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great chapter. 🤔 I think that Severus is starting to realize that Hermione knows many of his faults and weaknesses, and yet she still wants to save him. She still thinks he is worth saving. Will he realize that Lilly never would have done that? Also, it’s so sad that he now can see how alone she really is without her family. But it’s too funny when he thinks he is never going to get rid of her 😂. And what was Lucius thinking?  

schedule November 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

50: 😂 Misty is a trip! 

O’ Sevy... “stunning”? Couldn’t keep eyes off of Hermione😈. Things are starting to progress. 

“ Pull yourself together, Hermione. We have another hour and a half to endure.”  That is just too funny 😂. He definitely knows how to get her attention when trying to calm her down. 

schedule November 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Glad to hear you are well after the accident. 

49: 😂😂😂 she just realized where she hurt him! I can’t wait until the party! Wow, all those pure bloods will be at the mercy of Snape and Hermione. Nobleman and secretary instead of “greasy git” and “mudb...” 😈This could be fun or a big setback for Hermione if they are really mean and dismissive to her. Can’t wait 😊.

schedule November 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Why is Lucius so interested in getting Severus and Hermione together? Because he thinks she would be good for him or because he thinks Severus needs some “fun” and she’s available? Or he just wants to rile them up? 

schedule October 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Sneaky Snape! 😊 Hermione is all kinds of crazy, but at least her heart is in the right place. O Lucy, such timing. 😂

schedule October 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Well, at least the Malfoys are somewhat concern for Hermione, especially Cissy. At least nicer. Now what is Severus planning? 🤔 I hope he doesn’t want Hermione to help him die! I can just image her response to that consideration everything she’s doing to keep him alive. Poppy isn’t taking any 💩 from anyone. 😂

schedule October 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch 45: 😂 poor Hermione! That towel is going to give Snape something to think about!

 I understand how it’s important for Muggle born witches to know how to properly behave in the Wizarding world, BUT it’s hard to accept  that advice from people who are soooo rude. I would think that proper etiquette would include being civil to all guests, even unwanted ones. The Malfoy have been forcing Hermione to use the hallways when Potter visits! At least Cissy is growing on me. Draco is being just wimpy! 🤦🏻‍♀️ 

schedule October 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

😈 I’m also wondering what Mrs. Malfoy is up to! Poor Hermione! She doesn’t seem to ever get a kind word from anyone, especially Snape. 

schedule October 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Yay, you’re back! I was worried. 

Lucius jealous? 🤔 That makes sense. “ She did unforgivable..,” Really Lucius? You’ve done worse! I love Poppy. She tells it like it is. And she puts them ALL , Severus and Lucius, in there place. 😆  

schedule October 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

#42: it seems all the Malfoys are jerks, but I can’t expect them to just suddenly change after the war. And what 😮 was up with the kissing. I don’t think Severus was as immune to her “natural charm” as he wants to believe. 😂 Thanks for another great chapter.