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for Torment *Completed*

by Kvarta

schedule December 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

62: 😮 WOW! We are already on chapter 62! These two people are so damaged. But knowing that Severus is not in love with Lily means that there is a possibility of him moving forward if he could just learn to deal with his emotions. Hermione may have to be very careful. While she never tried to take advantage of her knowledge of Severus’ memories, he could use them against her while angry. He has a very sharp tongue! 

schedule December 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Thanks for the two new chapters. 😊 ahhh Severus is a living teddy 🐻 😂. It’s nice to see that noe he gets to see some of what she went through. It will help to make him see her as a damaged soldier and a woman, rather than just his student. 

schedule November 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I’m glad you had fun on your trip.

Oh, I see they are still trying to deny their attraction to each other. 😊  Hermione is also starting to understand that Severus would rather try to kill himself than deal with all his trauma.  Both have a lot of issues! 

schedule November 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Vienna ComiCon 2017! Soooo jealous! 

Thanks for the chapter. Misty is so funny. Both Severus and Hermione are delusional. 😂 Neither seems to want to realize their attraction for each other. Severus is so in denial that he can’t figure out his mistery dream woman. Let’s see: petit, smart, talkative, and caring of him. Who could that be? 🤦🏻‍♀️ And he still wants to be angry at her for not doing as he had expected she would do. 😊

schedule November 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

It's about time Hermione shocked Severus! Serves him right. 😂 Now I just wonder what she will see and do. As well as wondering who he will think about while taking care of his "problem." 

schedule November 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I like Cissy being motherly to BOTH Severus and Hermione without being overbearing. Also, what couple is Poppy referring to marrying based on magic compatibility? Now who fits Poppy’s description of Severus’s perfect match? 🤔😈😊

schedule November 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Another sad but great chapter. Blocks? What does that mean?! 🤔 I see Hermione got another bad memory from Severus if it’s her that hiccuping. I wish Severus would get to see some of her memories. See her being tortured or see her devastation at taking her parents memories away. Then, perhaps, he can see that she also has suffered. He knows this, but it would be so different if he experienced it like she does all her memories. 

schedule November 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I’m always torn between liking and disliking Lucius, but I’m happy that he told the truth. I’m happy someone finally placed Lilly in her true light. People forget the faults of those that have died. Did he mean that Lilly had flirted with R. Black also because she wanted to bag a man with status?

At least Hermione has realized her help isn’t always wanted or needed. The best thing is to just walk away and give people space. 

schedule November 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Lucius is going to lose his books! 😂 That should teach him. “Bend your head and not talk” I don’t think Severus is going to learn that lesson anytime soon.😊 Hermione is getting better and so is Severus. Slow but steady. 

schedule November 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

No Weasley presents? So much for loyalty! 😡 Who needs one of Molly’s ugly sweaters anyways. I like that Hermione doesn’t back down when she thinks Lucius is wrong. Draco is still a jerk. I can’t wait for the present to be opened. 😂 Severus still hasn’t realized that even though he can’t stand Hermione, he still find her attractive. Or at least his body responds to her . 😊