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by Kvarta

schedule January 24, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I love Poppy! She know Severus too well. 😂

Is Lucius really ill or is he manipulating Severus? Either way, it give Severus a reason to live. Also, I bet Lucius knew Hermione would listen in on them. 

Poor Hermione. 😣 she doesn’t know that Severus has seen one of her most embarrassing moments. 

schedule January 23, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Playing with Slytherins is tricky. 😈 Poor Severus, he can’t seem to comprehend that someone (Hermione) might actually care for him. I’m curious why Draco was there too! 

Mystery girl = denial 🤦🏻‍♀️

Severus’ mind just can’t seem to grasp that he might be really attracted to her. 

schedule January 22, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Bargaining chip? Hermione is about to make a deal with the devil.😈 What is Severus planning? I bet he hated it when she compared him and Lucius to Ron. 😂 

schedule January 13, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Ron needs a smack on the head. He may be grieving but he needs to keep himself in check.

Harry can’t seem to handle the truth just yet. 

Hermione is getting better.

Severus and Lucius are just Slytherins. Lucius goes through all the trouble of spying and talking to Severus instead of just saying, “ hey Severus, that girl might not be a bad choice for you. Draco and I won’t get in the way.” 😏 I goes he knows Severus needs proof that Hermione is over Ron.

And Severus 🤦🏻‍♀️ he doesn’t want to be alone with his thoughts but he does everything to keep her away. Human are so complicated. 

schedule January 12, 2018 at 12:00 AM

That block of wood was completely undeserving of a woman Hermione Granger will be one day. -was that Lucius thinking? 

Yeah, I have never liked Ron . 🤮 

😊 seems like Severus is showing a bit of feelings for her. If nothing else he seems to respect her enough to know that she is better than Ron. 😂 Even Lucius doesn’t like him enough to invite him into the house. 

 

schedule January 11, 2018 at 12:00 AM

67: I always love Hermione and Severus interacting. 

Poor Severus. 🤔 I think he was so certain that he would die in the end, that now that he is alive he doesn’t really know what to do. Especially since life has been good to him. Why would he want to continue? Hopefully Hermione will give him a good reason. 😊

Although Hermione is mad at the headmaster, the truth was that everyone was just a tool during war. 

schedule January 9, 2018 at 12:00 AM

 ðŸ• Dog! Really Severus! I’m surprised Poppy didn’t 👋🏼 hit him upside the head for that comment. 

At least now Severus is willing to admit to himself that Hermione is a much better person than Lilly ever was. Forgiving. Compassionate. Etc. Maybe that’s why he felt a tiny bit bad that he had made her angry and rejected her friendship.

I wonder what memories Harry is afraid Severus would/could use against Hermione? 🤭

lucius is still a bit of a jerk but at least Cissy is much nicer.

schedule January 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

🤔 perhaps he doesn’t want her know because then she will fill even more thankful and indebted to him. Then, he would REALLY never get rid of her. 😂 But probably he just doesn’t want anyone to know he can be nice. 

schedule January 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM

64: welcome back. Hope you’re feeling better.

Do as I say and not as I do!😂 Seems like Severus wants Hermione to analyze her feelings while he is unable to! 

schedule December 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I do not scream, Granger. - 😂 Severus never wants to admit he is human. 

I wonder who Hermione will have a talk with?