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for A World Not Fit To Live In

by snowblind12

person Hvsmith
schedule February 23, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Tough to read but I can see the importance! I am very intrigued to find out what happened to Draco, a quirrel style possession perhaps? I look forward to the next chapter and can't wait to read it!!x

person Hvsmith
schedule February 20, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I keep checking to see if you have updated and was so excited that you had! I love this story. I have never held any interest in Lucius Malloy as a love interest and am of the belief that he is purely evil in canon story. But you have changed this and made it so believable and the character so real yet likeable at the same time! So thank you to you both! I love that Harry is alive and I have been suspicious for a while about Draco' s behaviour so I'm intrigued as to what changed him! Cannot wait for your next update!xz

person Hvsmith
schedule February 16, 2019 at 12:00 AM

This chapter made me so emotional! Wow! I cannot wait to read more, this story is just amazing! 

person D_elliot
schedule February 2, 2019 at 12:00 AM

The anticipation is killing me!!

I hope beyond hope the baby is Lucius'. I have been pulling for him since the beginning and he deserves this WAY more than Draco. I can't wait for the next chapter!!

schedule January 27, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Still love both of your writing. This ones a tad dark for my tastes, but so well written and just catches my attention so I keep reading! Much love, and I look forward to the last few chapters!

 

schedule January 7, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Another great couple of chapters! I’m really enjoying the direction that the story is going!

person Hvsmith
schedule January 2, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Another great chapter, look forward to the next one!

person Sharp1
schedule December 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Excellent story but new(gulp) for me... It intrigues me about you two!!

Ginny drives me crazy generally, so I'm hoping for more there... I never saw or wanted a softer side of LM, so it's a stretch for me, but a very well written and thought out work. Looking for more. I am very much pleased by the strength of Hermione's magic and the garter and stockings are clever, ahem, in my opinion. Always ready.

Dean

 

person Sharp1
schedule December 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I must say.... I'm not into D/s or rape(damn!), but I have enjoyed the story a lot... Kept looking for 21, lol.

I'm generally turned on by intelligent, feisty, and have always gathered that from Hermione. Not to mention Emma W is sexy, lol. But nevertheless, I am looking forward to more. 

I never saw a soft side of LM , so that's a stretch, but I love your Snape. And Ginny kills me generally

schedule December 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Poor Hermione. She really just needs to catch a break.