Perfection!! Finally a bdsm fanfic that actually understands the core concept of bdsm is based in trust and respect for your partner versus 50 Shades (I don't think I need to say anymore on that mess). Anyways, I have to say you did a splendid job writing this; it was very sexy and really rather sweet at moments showing how he genuinely cares for her and respects her in only two chapters (and I could only imagine that had he known it was her first time he'd have taken a more romantic approach too). I can easily claim that this is definitely a new fav fic of mine (it also helps that I used to be a fan of NtK way back in the day though I never did finish reading it, think I got to around when he brought in the running girl, when it starts looking like a story is turning haremy I almost always lose interest and sadly so many mangas do that). Anywho, I loved this, it was great! And if you ever want to write more of this, I'll be happy to read more of Hermione & Draco's smexy little adventures ;)
I really loved this story and i hope that you continue it soon. I think you have a great start to what could be a fun, romantic and sexy story. Please continue!!
I'm not usually logged in so I haven't reviewed sooner, but I LOVE this story. I've come back to it at least five times to reread. Great work!
Oh, I like this a lot! I certainly wouldn't mind if there was another chapter to this. I really enjoy this Draco, nasty but genuine!
That was really well done. Sweet even with the mature.
Love the premise, execution was flawless. So glad you added the second chapter!
the new chapter was intense. great addition
Nice! Very sensual, yet sweet.
excellent
Great story to start my day! Very hot scene, so descriptive. I would be happy if I could write like this. Definitely write a second chapter.