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by Dragon_Ruler_06

person CR89
schedule August 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Please update soon.

schedule August 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh, please update soon! I can't wait for more I'm so excited I'm tingling.

schedule August 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

CH4 - Well, Lily is quite the bitch in this, isn't she? I liked how you twisted Ron and hermione's characters in realistic ways to make them prats. And yeah, not gonna guess, cos it is obvious! SP

person Jeda26
schedule August 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Absoluteely love the perverse and incesteous nature of this story and I can't wait to see where this story goes next. Definately think that given the amount of cum that Daddy has pumped into his sexy bitch's hole that Harry is pregnant already. Also given James comment about his touch turning harry's body into that of a women's in chapter, think that during the course of Harry's pregnancy his body should become very feminine and sexy in nature, which he will retain after giving birth. Also very interested to see how James and Harry will deal with the main obstacle to them enjoying their happiness and being together forever, that is Lily Potter.   

schedule August 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

CH3 - Well, I'm sure there will be plot at some point, but for now, hot smutty action definitely seems to be the order of the day! SP

person imsandir
schedule August 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Another great chapter. Looks like Harry really liked his birthday present! Hopefully he's preggers by now. Looking forward to how you handle Lily.

schedule August 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

CH2 - ANd the smut continues. Looking forward to seeing how they hide this from/get rid of Lily. SP

schedule August 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I've always wanted to say this and I finally got a chance

Are you a wizard or not? Haha. Two of the unforgivables are the easiest way to get rid of her. Imperius her and make her splich herself, make her take a long walk off a short pier.

and the other one is a flash of green light

person CDGaymer
schedule August 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

If u need to see one i for sure need to see one. Thought I just thought of something creul by making Harry Sev's son since he is so good at potions and all. Plus when James finds out, if ever, he would have the biggest shock of his lifetime that he has been raiseing Sev's son all that time.

schedule August 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Don't worry about being sick in the head - many people are! *wink* A very smutty opening chapter. Interested to read more, especially seeing Lily. SP