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for Made of Common Clay

by Lomonaaeren

schedule October 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Thanks for the update!

schedule October 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This is awesome! I do hope it gets finished!!!

schedule October 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

ahhhh!

I didn't catch this at the beginning and am crossing my fingers it's an "update every week" kind of story

schedule September 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch8 - Loved scary Harry, and Dragon Harry, and peacemaker Harry. He really has to keep on his toes, doesn't he?! SP

schedule September 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I like how Harry is REALLY enjoying all the mayhem he is causing. He's having such a good time :)

schedule September 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch6 - Oh, I am so loving manipulative Harry! He's so often portrayed as an idiot, and he isn't, so good job. Loved his reaction to Honeywell - putting the crest on - and his abstaining from voting. Brilliant. SP

person Kain
schedule September 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wonder if Susan will decide to side with Harry once she finds out just how little the group regards her and what she suffered from  the war. Harry is just dancing circles around the clowns and the only ones who suspect are the Malfoy's and thats mainly because they are natuarrly suspicious of him and know not to underestimate him and dont like him.

person staar
schedule September 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Well so far this is great...Harry is going to kick a lot of ass here....really sad to see Susan not doing anything, you can see that she is a follower and a chicken at heart!!!!!!! you go Harry and Neville !!!!!!!!!!!!! hope to see more soon.....

schedule September 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oooooh, clever, manipulative Harry! And yes, I enjoyed Lucius looking like he wanted to vomit and crawl under his seat, plus Harry thinking he might be seen as Grangy's pet human! Loving. SP

schedule August 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

CH4 - I feel a bit sorry for Kingsley in this. I get why he's weary, but at the same time, buck up man! And I loved Hermione's comment that Harry wasn't bitter at all (not much), and that Harry could clal himself King-God-Emperor of Surrey and it would mean as much as the poncy titles the sun chamber uses. And threatening the assassin with cook your cock - oh I grinned! SP