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for Made of Common Clay

by Lomonaaeren

schedule May 13, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Kreacher is funny. I like how he reacted to Harry getting himself in trouble again and kidnapped by stupid people lol.

person Kain
schedule April 15, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Ah that murky grey area morality area of things and i like that at least some people are questioning Harry's goal while also not agreeing completely with how things currently are in the wizarding world. You can see where they are coming from when they think that Harry intends on burning everything down and then skipping town to leave them to deal with it.

Harry has been pushed past the brink after years of trying to do things the moral way and now intends on breaking the corrupt wheel. Would he have also at one point considred just taking out the ones spining the wheel and their closest supporters? I mean like get in close and take out both the un chamber and the kingmakers and hope that whoever fills the void has the best intentions of the people at heart?

Curious on what he plans to do with the Elder Wand and what spell is gonna be used. Maybe not the best move to straight up tell Harry her intentions on opposing him but got to at least give Ginny points for having the balls to say that to him. If only that conviction could instead have been put to aiding Harry instead of going against him. She knows what he can do and while she is a tough little thing, a fight between them would not go her way. Will Ron have anything to say about his sister possibably being their enemy?

schedule February 24, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I've never liked Pansy. I like the way she got herself arrested. Is it a permanent Imperius curse? It wouldn't be good for her to tell all the Sun people that it was Harry who made her confess or the ministry who would get on his case for using blood magic. And that mother totally deserved justice for her son. I like that she was able to know the plan and watch. It also saves her from doing something stupid to get in trouble by getting revenge herself.

schedule January 28, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Is it just me or does everyone else also like when Harry is a badazz? :)

schedule January 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM

They are really stupid to think that Harry would willingly get rid of one of his best friends because she is Muggleborn. Are they just willingly blind to his friendship with Hermione?

schedule December 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wow!  Bring it down!  Great chapter by the way 

schedule November 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Love this story, please continue!

schedule November 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch12 - Well, that was entertaining! And I did chuckle at Harry's response to Parkinson casting Avada Kedavra - Historically that's failed to work in the past (or words to that effect) LOL! SP

schedule November 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Love all the people who think they can control Harry - and are wrong! Looking forward to the duel. SP

schedule October 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ok I finally logged in so I could review... I think Harry is hilarious in this. He's having such a good time and I'm having a lot of fun watching it :)