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for His Twenty-Eighth Life

by Lomonaaeren

schedule September 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch7 - Any chance of a glimpse into life 23 (yum!)? And Voldie is definitely behaving oddly. I like how you take canon events (e.g. the Longbottoms' torture) and reference it, but in a new way. SP

person Jan
schedule September 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Voldemort definitely is acting strange compare with his other counterparts, pleas update chapter 7 soon.

schedule August 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch 5

That's a dangerous game they play. Oooh. More clues about the nineteenth life. Sounds fun, but I hope it doesn't become Harry's downfall.

person Jan
schedule August 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I am so intrigued with life 19, can't wait to find out more of it. I am also intrigued with the concept of Harry forgiving Voldemort.... I mean Voldemort is seeing all of his pass mistakes, but then he thinks himself superior to them all (even if they are his pass selves), hope he doesn't betray Harry. Please update chapter 6 soon.

 

schedule August 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch5 - Interesting. Can Harry do that one thing and forgive Voldermort? And might it work? Hmm. SP

schedule August 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch 3: It's good that they all have realistic expectations and don't slip into cliches. I do hope that Voldemort will still retain most of his character until the end of the fic and not turn into some redeemed Tom Riddle.

I enjoyed reading about the Longbottoms.

Oooh. Cat-speak. Look forward to find out his other abilities from past lives.

person Jan
schedule August 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

A very interesting story, I'm intrigued to see how it'll turn out, please update chapter 5 soon. 

schedule August 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch 3: No, no, no. Please keep the delicious hints. I just don't want you to tell us outright and spoil the fun of anticipation.

Interesting to see their interaction. They seem to be on more or less even ground. In that Harry *could* escape, if he were willing to face the consequences.

So now Harry will be Voldemort's persona Scheherezade.

schedule August 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I did wonder, when Voldie kidnapped Harry, what he was planning. Now it makes sense. But, eek! Poor Harry, having to tell all to save his family, yet still find a way to defeat Voldie in some new way. Geez! SP

schedule August 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch 2:
Poor Harrykins. I wonder what theories his parents will have about how weird he acted all this time. Looking forward to what happens when he wakes up.

Yup yup, definitely looking forward to life 19. I wonder if he was a skunk or something. (No spoilers please.)