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for His Twenty-Eighth Life

by Lomonaaeren

schedule October 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

But I love your hints about life nineteen! I'm also looking forward to finding out more but I'm thinking he was Voldemort or Peter {shudder}

I found your story late but am loving the whole idea. There are currently 9 chapters and I just finished chapter 3

schedule September 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm really loving this but I'm wondering about the physical health of Harry? It doesn't sound like he gets any sunlight (there was one mention of it, is there a window in his room?), or fresh air, or exercise. He mentioned he gets fed so I'm assuming whatever Voldemort is feeding him has enough vitamins? I'm just wondering...keeping anyone in a room in almost-seclusion wouldn't be healthy no matter how smart the person was... That would be an interesting chapter... Voldemort taking Harry to the park to play on the swings... haha! 

schedule September 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This Lord Voldermort

is much more dangerous because he's sane.

However, there's a fatal flaw in his logic. An immortal like this particular harry can afford to be infintely patient. Every day Harry grows stronger. Harry just has to wait for a perfect opportunity and with an inhuman amount of experiance, one will inevitably present itself. 

schedule September 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch9 - Oh devious, devious Voldie! Now I understand why Harry had to write. And at least Jonathan is thinking about saving Harry, unlike fricking Dumbledore. And so pleased with your reply that we may get a rescue attempt, eventually. SP

schedule September 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch 9:

Clever plan. I really hope Harry doesn't fall for it.

I'm liking Dumbledore a little less. Jonathan seems adequate though.

schedule September 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hoping there might be some kinf of rescue for Harry, but I'm not holding my breath. Liking Death-to-Rabbits! SP

schedule September 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch8

Tom things way too highly of himself. I hope there comes a moment when Harry gets to beat the crap out of this Tom, just to knock him down a peg.

Interesting encounter there...

schedule September 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch7 - Poor Severus, I just feel his bafflement. And poor Harry too. Living so long, knwoing you have to do the same thing over and over ... geez. And life nineteen gets more and more mysterious. SP

schedule September 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch 7. Oooh. Very interesting meeting there. Liked Severus's thoughts.

schedule September 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch 6. Voldemort's attitude is interesting. Good to see non-evil Dumbles and Snape.

I hope at some point when we're further into the story and it won't count as spoilers, you'll post a review-chart of Harry's past lives just so we can keep them straight. It's not needed now, but if you keep referring to them, it might be necessary in 10-20 more chapters.