Re-read the first chapter and got some answers to my questions! I saw that you said Voldemort has made 5 Horcruxes so far, and that he still looks human!
Ch 16:
Damn it Dumbledore, you're not an expert in divination. And you're way too biased. I personally saw it as Harry having a tame and peaceful Dark Lord, not two Dark Lords taking over the world.
Voldy's good. I hope he continues on the road to enlightenment.
Dumbledore fell into the very thing the pheonix tried to show him not to.
Its masterfully written where a dark lord talks himself into it.
"How can I ensure that he’s not a danger before I go to my reach?"
You meant rest right?
Ch 15:
Minor spelling mistake: " doesn’t know how to wants to defeat " should be "he"
Good chapter. Voldemort has gotten more reasonable, good for him. Dumbledore makes me cautious on the other hand. I'm half-afraid he'll use the information that Harry's been giving them and start commiting atrocities to get rid of all the Death Eaters.
Fear has always made people do the most terrible things. The greatest fear of all is the fear of the unknown.
Fear protects but it also blinds.
This particular voldermort is he capable of love or is he geuninely like canon incapable of it?
Ch15 - Yes, Voldie is still in character and Jonny is just lovely, but Harry is right that his brother needs to develop his own self-reliance. I get he's afraid he might lose Harry again, but he needs to move past that, and start doubting Dumbledore.
Writing wise, I loved the structure of this chapter, with the repeated lines (and then the call back in 'So Voldemort meditated.'). I think life 28 is going to be incredibly complex! SP
Ch14 - Wow, Harry is scary powerful in this! And it was brilliant that he threatened Voldie with the one thing he couldn't bear - being forgotten and ignored. It was also completely in character for Voldie to now be thinking about how he could use Harry's power and try and gain that strength for himself.
And how adorable was Jonathan?! SP
Ch 14: Chapter full of magic and power. Nice to see Voldemort being bullied for once. Jonathan's awesome. Dumbledore's a prick (though not evil). As a war leader, I suppose he has to be.
Ch 13:
Interesting conversation with his family. Albus is a bit of a bastard. Looking forward to the outcome of that battle.