I love the progressing dynamic between Voldy and Harry!
and I love how you're writing Jonathan!
poor James at the end of this..he's floundering.
uuuugghhhh Damnit Remus!!! He should be one of the few to actually be on Harry's side! As a werewolf and someone people automatically distrust for being so, wouldn't he have empathy for Harry?? I guess it's like internalized self-hatred/non-acceptance of himself... like maybe he feels a need to prove he's "not like other Dark creatures"... he seems to really be clinging to this "Harry is a Dementor" thing, when Harry isn't actually a Dementor... he's just kept that ability/magic from a past life. Frustrating!
Still loving Jonathon....
Ch 20:
Awww. Jonathan's brotherly love is so sweet.
Aberforth seems reasonable.
Remus is a psychologically unstable fool (because he has unresolved complexes).
I wonder how Snape's doing.
I loved Voldemort's intensity in this chapter.... Harry is his prize, hehehe....
That moment when Voldemort referred to himself in third person... is that just him being arrogant and fancy or is he truly starting to see himself now as a different person than who he was in his youth? Perhaps....Tom is emerging?
Ch 19:
Oh, so he took one oath each time.
Lol. Two steps forward, one step back. (relationship)
I like your descriptions of magic.
Ch 18.
Frigging Dumbledore.
I was confused for half of the chapter when you said that Harry didn' t show up for Voldemort's oath. Figured it out later when you said he had to make it a second time. I don't remember the initial conditions for it and having to repeat it so...
Anyways, not feeling sorry for Snape at all.
Heh, at this point Jonathon is going to figure out Voldemort "wants" Harry before either Harry or Voldemort. I usually don't enjoy original characters in Harry Potter stories, but I am liking Jonathon a lot - he seems very perceptive and matter-of-fact about things.
Also Voldemort is totally sending notes like a teenage in class to his crush and he doesn't even realize it yet. Obviously I'm aware Harry is too young physicall still, but I'm just saying... Can't wait for more!
Aaahh I'm so ready for Harry to be a little older, be sneaking off to Voldemort's and his parents thinking he's sneaking off to meet someone for dates, etc XD
Ch 17:
I liked their interaction. Much more peaceful.
That's an interesting ritual you came up with, good job.
I really worry for Jonathan.
I am so eager to read the next chapter....I think I remember from the books that the only way Voldemort could live would be if he felt remorse for his murders/created Horcruxes... but we still haven't established how many he's made yet? Eager to see if this develops more. Also I can't remember if you've described yet, but what exactly does Voldemort look like at this point, and is that tied to how many Horcruxes he's made, as it was in the books?