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for His Twenty-Eighth Life

by Lomonaaeren

schedule March 29, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Glad to read more of this.... damn Albus.... glad at least Harry has Fawkes on his side. Still wondering what Snape and Bellatrix have planned and look forward to reading more Harry and Voldemort interactions! 

schedule March 28, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Ch 25

Oh good job Bumbledore. You've completely alienated Harry and your familiar and Jonathan (when he gets out from his control.)

Wooo hooo. Look forward to seeing what cool powers being the Master of Death adds.

schedule March 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Ch 24

Damn. I wouldn't trust Dumbledore as far as I can throw him. I wonder what happened.

I wish Tommy-boy could scold those damn kids, and maybe torture them a little. But Harry wouldn't like that.

schedule March 1, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Such a cruel cliff hanger... TT^TT

schedule February 28, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Loving the developments! Love reading Harry and Voldemort plotting together... 

I think Voldemort is onto something with Jonathon... Jonathon seems to be loyal to Harry, and if Voldemort can somehow convince Jonathon that Harry wants Voldemort to stay alive (and at this point he does, as long as he sticks to his oaths) then... they can all live happily ever after! 

Well maybe not Dumbledore. He'd be pissed. 

schedule February 28, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Ch 23

Nice little planning session.

Voldemort's obsession is kind of adorable here.

Looking forward to Fawkes' message

schedule February 16, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Aww Cedric... my heart can't help but still feel sad over that... I'm glad Jonathon is in Hufflepuff... he kind of reminds me of Cedric so far... a good, pure person. I hope he continues to stay this way. 

Ah, I didn't realize that Harry had dealt with an obsessive and communicative Voldemort before. I thought this was the first time that he had any type of relationship with him. You mentioned it in this chapter, not sure if I just missed past mentions of it. 

 Also Dumbledore sucks. Ugh. 

schedule February 15, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Ch 22:

Yup, Hufflepuff is not unexpected at all. Also very cute. And the fact that Harry watched the sorting.

I wonder what changed the Weasley twins so much that it affected their sorting.

I hate chapter titles (as a general concept). I keep thinking of the worst thing that could happen. I thought it would be discovered that Harry in communication with Voldemort.

schedule February 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Oh man... I hope Harry doesn't blame Voldemort for whatever Bellatrix and Snape try..... 

 

Love the way you describe Voldemort's words, actions, and the way he says Harry's name. Very sexy ;) Of course Harry for some reason, with all his wisdom and years, can't seem to see that Voldemort likes him yet. 

schedule February 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

c 21

Snape isn't taking it well, I see. Since he's decided to be an idiot, he definitely has a cozy torture session in the future. Or maybe not, if Voldy and Harry are really merciful.

Poor Harrykins.