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for His Twenty-Eighth Life

by Lomonaaeren

schedule June 22, 2021 at 12:00 AM

SO GOOD! Kind of weird with how slow it's going- time wise. I keep forgetting Harry is only nine so far. Lmao 

schedule March 12, 2019 at 12:00 AM

One of my favorite HP universe stories! Such a unique idea and great writing!

schedule May 14, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I had a few chapters to catch up on! I am loving this! Glad Sirius is reasonable, and that bit with Kreacher was interesting.... Of course I'm always loving all the little Voldemort/Harry moments... 

Question: as Harry grows up in his current body, will he experience teenage hormones/emotions etc or will he be able to surpress things like that? I'm only wondering because of course I'm imagining Voldemort getting a little more persistant once Harry goes through puberty and Harry having all sorts of volatile teenage emotions... Also stupid scenarios, like Harry going to a Yule Ball type situation and of coure having a sucky time so he Apparates to Voldemort's and then Voldemort compliments his dress robes or something and Harry's little teenage heart starts racing.... Yeah I'm crazy. 

Anyway, loving your writing and story telling as always. 

schedule May 9, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Ch 30:

Good chapter. I hope Dumbles doesn't get to any horcruxes.

"Feel" - awkward, lolz. At least Harry can keep honestly telling Dumbles that Voldy's crushing on him.

The situation with his parents is sad.

"Hallows were becoming restlessly" - "restless"

schedule May 2, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Ch 29

Very interesting conversation there. Lol, Sirius noticed Harry's growing feelings towards Voldemort even if Harry won't admit them to himself. Lovely chapter overall.

schedule April 25, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Ch 28

In fanfiction, Bella can be insane even without going to Azkaban. Her obsession with Lord Voldemort can make her a nasty jealous bitch. But yeah, glad you have her mostly sane.

Lovely chapter. It's nice that Sirius is loyal to Harry.

schedule April 23, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Yessssssssssss Posessive Voldemort is everything. Surprise Dumbles! 

schedule April 21, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Ch 27

Hurray for brotherly love! I'm glad that situation's mostly solved.

Good Bella! I hope she continues being a faithful servant instead of an insane jealous bitch. Sevvy's getting what's coming to him.

schedule April 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Ch 26

Awwwww. That was like a proposal. And now the connection between them is deeper and more even.

It's nice that Jonathan has such friends. I look forward to seeing his thoughts clear and what he thinks of Dumbledore afterwards.

schedule April 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Omg yes..... reading that description of magic was wonderful. Loved it. Loved that last paragraph as well.... 

I hope Jonathon is smart enough not to give away that he's no longer under a curse to Dumbledore, at least right away.... I'm afraid he would be in danger otherwise!