Another great chapter GB . Love the developments. My wife has told me several times I should try my hand at some hp/hg fanfiction . Not sure how to or where in the hp timeline to start my story at. Could you give me some suggestions ? Thanks again for more great writing . Loved reading HFLP, YBID ,MIL , and DB. loom forward to reading more of your work.
Really enjoying the story once I was able to get past the first few chapters and eveything they detailed. Keep up the great writing!
CH1 - I was cheering Harry on from the sidelines when he told his teachers what for. It's about time someone told Dumbledore what an absolute prat he has been!
And when you had Malfoy mention Merlin was a Slytherin I grinned. I tell that to anyone I can!
You made Ron a right royal prat (which, yes, he is). Good to see him not being forgiven.
Oh, and you said British fry ups were popular/common. Er, not so sure on that one ... certainly, where I live and grew up, cereal was the norm. Maybe I just didn't/don't live in the right part of the UK!
Enjoying this. SP
Ty for the responseGB. I had forgotten about Sirius' gift so I can now see the logic better. With how long Harry waits in the common room I still think he would have thought of the map though perhaps not in time to stop what happened.
Personally I never had much of a problem with Harry using the sectumsempra on Draco as when you are in a fight for your life you should be prepared to use every weapon you have. All Harry knew was that it was "for enemies" so yes it was reckless and rather stupid to use but in the rush of events I personally would have been surprised if he didn't use it.
thanks again and take care
Thrilled to see you starting another story GB. I am curious about why Harry waited for Hermione all night when he has the Marauder's Map though. If he doesnt have it you may want to address why pretty soon as it seems to be a pretty big plot hole.
Im going to have trouble waiting on an update since you only just posted the first bite;) Keep up the great work. i loved your addition to HFLP and the latest installments of MIL have been great. I like the fact that you have made enough changes to make both stories worth following.