Just wanted to say hello and say thank you for another great story. I wanted to compliment your work in making the wizard worlds move into a totalitarian state so believable with the use of existing prejudice and propaganda.
I was looking forward to the reappearance of McLaggen and while his recruitment into the Deatheaters was fairly likely, I am enjoying the time you are taking to show Draco leading him into darkness in easier to handle steps. Kill an old Muggle, rape, ... Turning McLaggen into a willing evil death eater rather than just taking the quick route from school rapist to 2-dimensional bad guy.
meltyman
Hey Gandalf
my hats off to you sir. However on another note I am practically on my knees begging for more chapters for DB and YBiD. As always though I’m a huge fan of your stories, they always grab me and pull me into the story and takes you on an journey with every chapter and keeps me on the edge of my seat with an awesome and engaging story line. As always thanks for your time and keep up the good work
Another great chapter GB. I look forward to more. I see how you are alternating updates between the three stories and I think its brilliant so you don't burn out on just one story. It's good to take a break from a story once in awhile. Can't wait till the next chapter
Another great chapter GB. I look forward to more. I see how you are alternating updates between the three stories and I think its brilliant so you don't burn out on just one story. It's good to take a break from a story once in awhile. Can't wait till the next chapter
Another great chapter GB. I do hope that Cormac and Draco get their comeuppance before long. Can't wait till the next chapter. I am currently rereading MIL and just finished rereading HFLP.
I’m really enjoying this - a similar theme to your other stories but with a different slant. Will there be a coven? I kind of hope so, but won’t be surprised if there isn’t. Hopefully the muse will be inspired to revisit this story soon.
I was wondering when we would run into McLaggen again
Seemed like a perfect death nibbler or at least a fellow traveller
Another well crafted story, thank you
GB, it's great to see you writing more YBID and DB chapters. I love reading these two stories. Still going strong with those two stories.
Please add some chapters to Damaged Bridges, and also Yuletide Blessing in Disguise. Moments in Love was an amazing experience and I believe you wrote the story as it should be written. Please try to find the time to get some more chapters posted, cause I'm hanging on the edge of my seat for both stories. Keep up the awesome work.
Another great chapter GB