Poor Harry! Still some of my favourite parts are conversations between Harry and his fluffy side. I'm interested to reading Snape's reaction to the pup.
Whoa! You updated real fast this time. It was very much appreciated.
I thoroughly enjoyed these two chapters. But man, Ron and Mundungus are both absolute bastards in your version! I'm glad Ron's gone, as he was really getting on my nerves (was his outburst at the end homophobic, or just because it was Snape?), but I still want to see Dung punished in some way. Karmic retribution and whatnot. Pretty please :)
I'm sorry for Harry's pup, but it's true, it would have been very inconvenient to be preggers while on the Horcrux hunt. I'm glad the potion didn't affect his fertility in the long run. Can't wait for the next chapter!
I'm in agreement with Book Addict on all counts for this chapter. Loved the single-line scene and how it perfectly captures that moment. There are also all kinds of clues you're dropping right now! I'm especially intrigued by that last horcrux bit... the idea that the intentions and reason behind an act of magic is more important than the magic itself, as far as consequences are concerned. I'll be really interested to see how that plays out.
Can't wait for more!
"Walking rather oddly, Harry returned to his two friends, a contented smile on his face."
I spat my drink everywhere reading that line. Bloody brilliant.
Has Harry become fertile and ready for pups or am I reading too much into the clues?
Uh-oh... I can see you're setting up that MPreg already. Wonder when that will come into play. No doubt it will make things complicated for all involved.
Why must Ron be such a little douche? He and Harry need to work their business out or Ron's going to flee the hunt a lot faster than he did in canon.
Looking forward to the next chapter, especially after that tasty little preview you gave us!
Great start to the sequel.
Severus and Harry must get together at least once more before they go to their separate 'jobs'
I almost stopped reading after the passage where Harry and Wolfy were having their conversation just to come and write how much I loved that section - it was very well written. I had a massive grin on my face the whole time I was reading it. Can't wait for them to be together again. I'm excited to see how you get them back together with everything going on around them.
Pervs? *sniffs*
We're not pervs. It's not like we get enjoyment out of watching other people's private...
nevermind. Pervs it is. *smirks*
I am really excited about the continuation of the story and I am probably a bad person for wanting the wolf to hurt, not bite, Tonks for comparing Harry to Him.
I will happily accept my cookie, thank you. And yay for smutty goodness! By all means, bring it on. We *pervs* need to get our fix!
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Parts of it made me laugh out loud, which is an accomplishment when you are currently dealing with some fraught situations. I especially loved the letter Severus included with the Snitch. You can feel the love come through in his words even when he's calling Harry an idiot.
Eagerly awaiting what comes next!
Well, alrighty. An intriguing start! I'm glad Harry has managed to get his transformations under control. And what a precarious freaking situation Severus is in! I always feel the anxiety reading fics with DH from his pov, but I feel like you've raised the stakes with all that he has to hide from Voldie. It stresses me out! (But not necessarily in a bad way)
Looking forward to when Harry and Sev can reunite (of course), but also just looking forward to seeing how the Horcrux hunt and everything else will unfold with Harry's wolfiness in the mix!
And thanks for the dedication :) I hope my reviews will continue to motivate and inspire. I know all too well how vital they are!