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by SickPuppy

schedule August 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

But if anyone can make it happen it's you. Harry doesn't have to die does he? You could find a way for both him and the pup to survive and kill the bit of voldy in his head. How long is Harry's pregnancy? Normal human length or wolfy length? 

 

I hope everything goes well on Tuesday. We only had Georgie spayed so nothing to worry about but trying to keep a 6 month old puppy calm and resting is providing quite tricky especially when her brother doesn't understand that she can't play.

schedule August 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Mmm I'm loving getting these double dosages of updates!

Great twist with Greyback! Unexpected but really well done. It makes total sense that Greyback would put someone he considered pack and their pup above stupid old Voldie. He's a bit of a rogue, after all.

It sucks that Harry's been outed, though. I hope this doesn't make things too dangerous for Severus. And I hope Harry doesn't fixate too much on the Hallows! Maybe Sev will come by and knock some sense into him? They need to get some more horcruxes taken care of asap.

schedule August 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Phew! No needless murder of Dobby. 

The pup better be okay I'm invested in its survival. 

Oh and glad your cats doing better! Getting medicine into an animal is so hard. One of my puppies had an operation yesterday and trying to get liquid medicine into her this morning was hard.

schedule August 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Gah! I missed so many updates! And these were stressful ones too. I am glad to not have to relive the trauma of the middle section of DH too much, though. You do a good job of touching on those elements but focusing on the new action we haven't seen yet.

Ron is still annoying the hell out of me. I keep thinking he's going to do something to ruin everything. I guess he did make himself useful with the potion so Harry can apparate but small potatoes, I say, compared to what a dick he's being overall.

Thank god Severus is entering the picture again. I was missing him and his steady competence. It was soothing.

schedule August 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

How did I miss this update?! 

I'm glad Ron is less of an arsehole but he's still an arsehole.

I'm really sad that they are already going to the Lovegood's because that means the story is getting closer to finishing and I'm not ready for that. I hope you are planning a new story already. Thank you for all your support with NWHCE. I've just uploaded the last chapter...

 

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schedule August 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Sigh. Ron. He's such a...Good chapter! Please don't follow DH too much, lol. Bad stuff happened. :)
schedule August 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh god just had a thought!! Dobby!! I'm not sure I'm prepared to witness his death over again!

 

schedule August 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

How can you leave us like that? It's not fair. And now I sound like a sulking toddler. 

I can't wait to read what you've got planned. I haven't got anything in the pipeline just yet. I write when I feel like it. That being said I've got quite a bit of time off work over the next few weeks so I'm sure something will spark my interest.

schedule August 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Really really beautiful how much Severus loves Harry and how thrilled he is with the thought of the cub.

schedule August 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

"You are not calling me mum!" Bloody brilliant!

 

I can't get enough of this story. I loved Changes but Advances has long since replaced it as my favourite story on here.