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by SickPuppy

schedule August 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I cried at Harry and Snape's conversation. 

I loved the Changes and Advances exchange. 

I felt sick reading the preview of the next chapter. 

 

Please don't let there be a long wait before the next update.

schedule August 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Nicely done! I love that Draco grew some humanity and pulled Hermione out of the RoR... future romance, perchance?

As a fellow writer I understand you have to do your thing. I wouldn't actually expect you to change the story for my sake. I'm just venting my anxiety, really, by hoping they will all survive. But that's how you know you're doing a good job. I'm invested!

I can't believe how close we are to the end! I guess we'll find out soon who survives this ordeal. Can't wait!

schedule August 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

A lot did happen in that chapter. I can't believe how close to the end we are... I am both excited and nervous

schedule August 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hahahaha loved the goat references with Aberforth. Had me cracking up! Nicely done.

Also good on Hermione for her badass handling of the horcrux. They're so close now!

You're getting me really nervous for the battle. I want Harry, Sev, and their pup to survive so badly! Pleeeeaaaaseeeee??????

schedule August 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I love how this almost parallels the book, but just sliiiiiiightly deviates.

schedule August 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

So I've had a think and I'm glad Dobby died over Kreacher. I've got a bit of a soft spot for the old grouchy elf. Glad Sev is back, I've missed him.

schedule August 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Well. That was certainly unexpected! 

schedule August 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Not sure I want to talk to you after that! *pokes tongue out like a spoilt child* 

 

Well at least they got the cup... I hope there is smut soon to make up for that.

schedule August 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Poor elves! I'll be honest, this was a bit confusing. Did both elves die, or did Kreacher manage to survive? It's sad either way but I want to know!!

I'm glad they were able to get the cup without giving up the sword though. Now it's just the diadem left, right? (Plus the one in Harry... how are you going to solve that one, I wonder...)

I can't believe how close we are coming to the end already! I want it to last longer!

schedule August 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Loved the update.

Can't wait to see the payback Fenrir will reek once he is free from the Dark Lord's presence, and extra well done on dumping Bellatrix into it.

Glad Harry and the pup are still okay.